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when applejack was a filly she got cursed. nopony know how. her Family know next to nothing about it. all they know is, she can't get angry. now she face the fact that she is the timberwolf. but she cant risk her friends or Family, what will she choose?
-bad grammar and spelling of words.
-will recreate one day (pinkie promise)
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Before I can start reading it again, please re-read the piece or get an editor. Forgive me, but the grammar and punctuation are really bad. Use Open Office or Google Docs for at least basic spelling correction.
P.S.: Many people on here don't have English as their prime language. That is no excuse, however, when posting here. You are responsible for your work and trying to justify plain laziness with a language barrier is just horrible practice. If you can't spell in English, write in another language (which would force you to post elsewhere) or use a dictionary.
I like the story and the concept, but the grammar really needs work. Please get an editor or at least re-read the chapter and make corrections. Sometimes people quote instances of spelling or grammar mistakes, but honestly there are too many.
If you sent me the file, I would be willing to correct this chapter and tell you what I did and why, so that you would understand for future chapters.
So, in conclusion, I like the concept, but your grammar needs works. I'll be following this.
I'd point out the errors and mistakes but I only have my phone. Sorry.
Oh man why is Applejack being all jump at the begin and why did a timber wolf called her his queen? Can't wait for more keep it up
love this story I truly do but the spelling is bugging me a lot and sometimes to story gets a little confusing. maybe if I can figure out how I could be some help with editing I could fix the misspelled words for you somehow you could send it to me and I could fix some errors and send it back for you to approve it's all up to you but I wish you good luck for the rest of the story!!
Im sorry for all the wrong words. I wrote this on my IPad and It is going crazy for me too. I really hate to do this on my notebook. Sorry. I will soon get a new computer and I will rewrite it. But I give it a new story page. But until then This has to be.
I am truly
sorry
You got some errors like when twilght is asking where apple jack is you spelled wher. You also have some gaps. But other than that a good beginning to a story.
Ermm... Grammar.
And ironically, a grammar ad was placed right beside your story.
Aside that, I will get around to reading your story when I have the time. I mean, there's Applejack. So why not?
Ermm... Grammar.
And ironically, a grammar ad was placed right beside your story.
Aside that, I will get around to reading your story when I have the time. I mean, there's Applejack. So why not?
4887799 I know about the grammar,
Im not from eny English land. Im from Norway and I got a strong 3 in English writing
. Sorry
. but I do my best.
I really like it except for the grammar issue is totally bugging me like... A lot but not enough to drive me away. Keep up the good work!
4895097 thanks I am trying my best to keep a good grammar,
but it is not easy
to Write on a pc that say everthing is wrong,
cause it is English. my pc is Norwegian and only Write on that Norwegian.
If you can get an editor I can read this
4895127 yo pal, if you want i can proofread or correct this... that if it is ok with you
5025554 okey...
5025668 pm me and give me a g doc or something so i can help you out
I like this idea A LOT! but I couldn't read it because there is just to many obvious mistakes. I mean small things like not capitalizing a name is fine, but some of these mistakes are really just irking me.
5413959 sorry, when I get the idea back I will rewrite it... I think... I hope... Yeah...
Wow I'm in shock you cancel the story i hope you write more of this story please it's getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update more soon