Changed my name cus, I found out that I love ravens. And I got a new main OC
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Ponyville mental hospital get a new patient, but she is the most difficult patient they have ever gotten, she is given to the best doctor in Equestria, Twilight Sparke she can help her! Right?
Edit 2: if you see a new chapter that you can't enter, that means I have a password to my proof-reader
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Good job
5600430 dunno
5600430 wanna help me? What do you want to happen?
5602233 that's a good idea....
5602259 but can I use it?
5602304
You need a Proof-reader
5629437
5629482 well.... How do you think it will start?
totaly not trying to get more ideas!5629501 can I use some of it?
5629517
Tell me if you EVER get something to a chapter! I love it!
I love to inclue others in my stories!
5629529 PM me whenever you want, but I might not answer at once, I might be asleep. It's night time where I live
how did Twi find out?
5632791 Find out in next chapter!!!!
5633190 oh ok
Wow
5753482 Don't worry, the next chapter will be kinder toward Applejack, so far everything has been sh*t for her...
5753578 that is very true! Poor AJ!!!!
Awww!!!!~♥ I almost cried! Don't do that to meh!!!
5793694 what!? how? on what?
5793698 The family meeting!
5793707 oh! so bad? omg, I didn't mean to make you cry!
5793709 It wasn't bad it was sweet!
BUT TOO SWEET! 
5793714 hahahaha.... omg.... I think I am going to ship this more, I like it.... But this has to be my bets story I think, I love the story. But now... I need the next chapter....
5793719 lol
It's a cool concept, but there are a lot of grammatical spelling errors, and generally needs a LOT of work.
Hooray!
Cool!
This story has potential, but you need a proofreader. I recommend that you join a proofreading group. Volunteers will help you remove all of the errors.
I wish I could thumbs up this all over again... You know it crossed my mind, then I remember I already did...
But YAY! Awesome chap!
6051840 I thought it said crap but then I read it over gain...
6051846 You thought I said something bad about your story? Lol
6051865 But I love your comments! They are so nice! I thank you so much!!
6051867 You're welcome, I love all ya'lls stories
6051880
why does anyone ever trust a demon? what level of stupid do you need to be to think that a demon is worth trusting? je openly admited to lying all the time, talked you into lying about everything else, told you not to talk until something very bad looking happened, and yet she still thought he was trust worthy.
6052728 hey,hey,hey,hey!!! It's not over yet! There will be more!
6054020 sorry, it was just a rant. had a crappy last couple of days, and it affected my outlook on some stories.
6054046 It's okay, they think he is gone, but I got plans... *evil laugh*
6054054 well of course he isn't gone. that story of his was full of so much crap that i can't believe AJ fell for it. then again, she's not in her right mind, so....
anyways, i knew that that wasn't the last of him. even if he is 'gone,' that power of his is going to cause major trouble.
6054071 yeah!
After this line, I know that there will be something going on.
This only confirms my suspicions. I must say, I would like to try and see the others trying to break her out of that hospital if she does get kidnapped.
Also:
Best line in this chapter, in my opinion.
6100684 It's fine, welcome back by the way! Take your time, I need sometime to think of the next chapter anyhow
RariDash
Too short, sooooooooo rushed. Context is good
but presentation could be better
.