Twilight has the power to change the biological structure of anypony, or anydragon into something else. And, after seeing Rarity fall over other stallions, Spike the dragon wants Twilight to change him into a pony so that he could finally have a chance to be with the mare of his dreams. She gives in and casts a spell on Spike, turning him into a pony. However, this spell is temporary, unless Spike gets his cutie mark within three days.
But becoming a pony for the sake of Rarity comes at a price; Twilight Sparkle will lose her one and only number one assistant, something that is dear to both her and Spike.
Chapters (2)
Interesting concept for a story. I do see a lot of potential in it. Your grammar was good, and I liked the flow of the chapter. I will decide when about 2 more chapters are released if to favorite this story or now. Good luck with the next chapter. I'm expecting great things from this story.
seems good for now, so... meh, i'll like it
Little short ended but still a fantastic peice of work. I see great potential in this story
Fly with it
That is an awesome premise. I'm definitely reading this.
Call me speedy! (even though my picture though my picture is a huge tank)
Indeed, twilight. We'll just see what the future brings us, little bookworm pony.
Speedy. Of all the things to call yourself, it was speedy. From how you look: Purple fur, green mane/tail color, green eyes, used to be a dragon, most likely not used to being an equine quite yet.....How about~
"Zapp Brannigan?"
Quiet yourself, Misconduct. How about Clover Scale?
Well, at least he didn't tell Pinkie that his surname is "gonzales".
Nice start. Maybe a little rushed at times, but rather nice. Get a like.
Need a name? Why not Zoidberg?
Name why not kyro where the mane six is confused about his name you just to make you brainstorm
What that game is fun!
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Just kidding you guys! I've only seen someone play it!
Very interesting!
I've always wanted to see a fanfic of this
Also Twilight doesn't even need him as an assistant anymore anyways
I've seen less and less of him assisting her over the few seasons.
I really like this!
I can't wait for more!
I'm surprised. VERY. Surprised. No one, and I mean NO ONE actually thought that Spike would get his cutie mark by doing the same thing he aphas been doing for nearly his WHOLE LIFE!? -_- I am so mad right now that people overlook things...
Please finish this!
You know what? If people don't start finishing their own stories...
I WILL FOR THEM.
YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
7789195 Been soooo busy with work; I'm a teacher, and I have to do stuff like make lessons and exams for our kids. Whenever I do have free time, I would prefer either drawing or playing games. Rest assured, I have NOT forgotten about this story. Its just, I'm kinda waiting for things to happen in the canon show before I implement them into this story. Like, for example, in the canon show, the CMCs now have their cutie marks, so I'm not sure how to implement this into my story now, Give me time, mate.
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yeh true
5231371
autocorrection at its finest
7789196
Who's to stop you? It's not illegal.
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not anymore
5311291
alert.
You have been banned from Equestria permanently.
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