On their wedding night, as they experienced the afterglow of their love making, a young alicorn princess and a young royal guard officer contemplate with each other on how two ordinary ponies such as themselves were blessed with so much.
Was their love by chance, or destiny?
This is a bit short. But I liked it.
I dunno why,but my heart stopped working properly while reading this.
*shrugs*
Anyway,awesome. Get in to my favorites <3
Apparently everyone hates Flash Sentry.
Well he is a Mary Sue.
Might as well bring on the haters.
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Absolutely love this pairing and you wrote this in a very cute way, I really enjoyed it! :3
All I could think while looking at this was "am I going to read this?" And then I was like fuck yea I am!! Hope it lives up to expectations
Also why people hating on flash he is good guy!!
It's short and sweet and just perfect that way.
There are a few errors though.
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How can pony Flash be a Mary Sue when he had all of one minute of screen time?
This is a simple ship fic with good grammar and no OCs yet people have down voted the junk out of it just because they don't like a character in it? Sheesh, this is a solid one-shot and no way does it deserve that kind of hate.
I liked this fic, it's a fun little story and Flash got a little background to boot.
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Flash can't be a Mary Sue because by definition, a Mary Sue is a fan-fade character.
Flash can be "The Scrappy," "The Wesley," or "The Poochie."
3359805 Technically he would be called a Gary Stu... a male title for Mary Sue's. And I seriously don't get why he's called that since all we really know next to nothing about either Flash.
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I'm well aware of that.
I actually wish there was more to the story in my opinion it is the seed of something great
Simple fic, with good grammar and no OC's and yet people just down vote it just because they hate the character? That's just stupid.
Why people hate Flash, I will probably never understand.
It can be improved by making their conversation longer? Or is it just me?
3377496 yeah, I'm notorious for making really short stories I wish I could make them longer...
3377496 They hate him because they are all blood-sucking maggots that need to be cleansed from this good earth.
Adorable!
5437497 I love Flash Sentry! I despise any who hate him for stupid reasons.
If you like him, then you and I are allies.
5438434 good all haters are not welcome here
5438434 and I hate when other people hate on perfectly good fics just caus thay don't like a person in it
5440088 I agree fully with you on that.
I wonder why stories like this gets down voted, it's pretty clear that Flash and Twilight were meant to be together.
I'm sorry but this is the worst turn on ever.
5799470 Why? It is good.
My favorite ship. Too bad Hasbro abandoned it :(