You are writing an awesome story great chapter. Your one my favorite authors.

YOU'RE BACK!
YOU'RE OK!
I love you, and I love this story. I certainly was not expecting this to be the story that updated when I checked my favorites, but I was pleasantly surprised!
I loved this chapter! Your OCs are awesome, just btw.
I'm a big Rarijack fan, so I do love those short Rarijack moments and seeing how Rarity is doing down in that hole.
Great chapter!
And I'm happy to see you are doing alright! Or, at least alright enough to get out another chapter!
I wish you luck with whatever it is you have! Just know that we love you!
ScatMan

OHMYCELESTIAYOUUPDATED!!!

I love you.

ITS ALIVE!!!!!!!!

The story that is...

Woot! Welcome back pony!

YOU'RE BACK! HAZA! Always great to see this story update

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Thank you~! It really is quite nice to be back. I am glad you enjoy this fanfiction! I am continuing to write the next chapter as much as my health allows, but [several] chronic illness(es) are a tricky thing to negotiate! I sincerely appreciate the fact that you take the time to read these chapters when I can post them!

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Thank you!!!
I am super glad that you enjoy this fanfiction!
I’m a big ol’ RariJack fan myself, too which is how that pairing ended up being significant in this story.
I’m actually really glad that you like my OC’s because I was really worried that they were being overused or that someone would have a problem with Bean Sprout because I chose to give her a stutter. Personally, I like to write even minor characters with things that make them seem “human” (or in this case, equestrian). I think I like them too much, because I keep sketching them in my school notebooks.
I had to really think how to do this scene because I wanted to do the “lotion” scene but the Hawker doesn’t have a cute animal sidekick and a hose isn’t really a sufficient form of punishment, so I went with magic.
Anywhoodles, I appreciate the long review and the fact that you’re enjoying this story. It means a lot!

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Favorite?

I just got way too excited. Thank you so much.

Not enough updates. I've been waiting for an update for what feel like an eternity. I know I enjoy this fic. I enjoy grim/dark myself, and would like to see more updates. You've got my support
Iceshadow

Oh sweet sugary BAWLZ, you are back with a new chapter! ^_^ Many squees were had, I confess. I love this story! One of my favorite Grim-darks!

*Looks at the date on the last chapter* Great, I am now hooked and I probably won't see a new chapter for a while.

This Looks AMAZING!!!! im always a fan of horror/mystery.

*groan* I just found this and now i'm on a cliffhanger and the story hasn't updated in two years!

Please finish this story!

Is there going to be a sequel.

MOAR

I'm so sad this was left unfinished!!!! Dx

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me too

Finally some good pinkamena dash

It’s a shame this hasn’t been updated for a while now, as Pinkamena stories are pretty rare. Everything up till this point is great so I can only imagine what would have happened next!