My only real criticisms would be to be careful with the FlutterMac since it's pretty much completely tangential to the rest of the plot (so far) and may end up being a distraction. And to be less apologetic in your authors notes and move them to the end of a chapter. Starting off every chapter with an apology about how bad it might be doesn't create a good mindset. Also, a lot of the things you comment on also tend to lead character interpretations. If you feel the need to explain how you wrote a character that's fine, just let me form my own opinion first without being influenced by hearing yours.
2749479 2744918 I apologize. This last semester has been a bitch. I broke up with my boyfriend of five years, but ended up dating someone new and I'll admit I was still in that "honeymoon" phase. I was also pretty sick. However, New boyfriend has been a great beta and the next chapter is almost done. I also have plans for a sequel that will parody Hannibal rather than Silence.
heh, i recently saw the silence of the lambs, and i cannot wait for you to finish this. it's a good read.
Yes! I was wondering when this was going to update again. It's great as always and I eagerly await the next chapter.
YAY!
New chapter!
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I hope you enjoyed the real version as well as my tweaked ponified one!
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Thank you, I appreciate your continued readership!
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I hope you enjoyed it!
This. Is. Awesome.
This fic....i must....
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This has actually been very good so far.
My only real criticisms would be to be careful with the FlutterMac since it's pretty much completely tangential to the rest of the plot (so far) and may end up being a distraction. And to be less apologetic in your authors notes and move them to the end of a chapter. Starting off every chapter with an apology about how bad it might be doesn't create a good mindset. Also, a lot of the things you comment on also tend to lead character interpretations. If you feel the need to explain how you wrote a character that's fine, just let me form my own opinion first without being influenced by hearing yours.
Interesting. I like this Pinkie a lot.
I want to hug her for some strange reason. It would the very last hug of my life I bet.
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My only regret is that I didn't find this fanfic SOONER.
I really like it so far and hopefully you're still updating it
Come back soon, Dashie! huhuhuhuhHAHAHAHAHHA absoluly CRAAAAAZZYYYYYY
Y u no update?! (\>_</)
Seriously, I need my Hannibal!Pinkie. Like, soon.
But no hurry. I know you are the master here.
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I apologize. This last semester has been a bitch. I broke up with my boyfriend of five years, but ended up dating someone new and I'll admit I was still in that "honeymoon" phase. I was also pretty sick. However, New boyfriend has been a great beta and the next chapter is almost done. I also have plans for a sequel that will parody Hannibal rather than Silence.
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Oh Pinkie. Y U no flirt correctly?
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Thanks!
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Nah. Its fine. I know how life can get in the way. Congrats on the new relationship.
Liking this Pinkamena a LOT!