that story with the party sounds.... amazingly less bad than the cupcake killer stuff...... but you must have done something right it plays out in my head like a film.
702392 Heck yes! I love it when people love my Pinkamena! I hope you like Chapter Four!
735532 Thank you! I really like it when people say that. I just used the moniker and crimes so she would still be a cannibalistic killer like Hannibal Lecter, if that makes sense. Aside from that, I tried to do entirely different stuff with this story.
Pinkamina creeps me the fuck out. Not as much as Hannibal did but your still doing a bloody fine job. That said I found Rainbows story to be a little... Cartoony I guess. And I know this is a fanfic of a cartoon but it just didn't fit in with the tone of the rest of the chapter as far as I could tell. Yeah this is getting a like and a fave.
Yeah, but psychological damage from bullying can be pretty serious. I didn't want to be cliche and have her be an abused filly and in the books Clarice's terrible memory is seeing sheeps slaughtered. I couldn't do anything like that in a animal filled world. So I chose a public embarrassment story. I wish I could have chosen something super awesome but I really couldn't think of it.
737416 Thank you very much! Yeah! Who doesn't want to join a crazy dead donkey party? Lol. I really appreciate your comments.
738521 Haha, thanks! I have noticed that most people who write Pinkamena forget her personality as Pinkie Pie or make them two separate entities. I wanted to keep both natures, the vile and frivolous without making her fighting for the same body but rather living cohesively inside of it, even if she is not quite aware of how strange she comes off.
Yes!! yet another great chapter keep updating i see this story has lots of potential,dear celestia i just wanna give this pinkamina a huge hug i dont even care if i get turned to cupcakes By the way whats the difference between clop and lemon if its both sexaul?
Thank you! CUPCAKE HUG! Well, clop is technically lemon, but it's pony-smut and prior to this I had never written anything but sex with humans. So, it was a bit of a challenge to get the terms right and think about the positions and how it was supposed to work. You know?
753276 As much as i hate to admit it i think im quite capable of getting the terms and the positions right because clopfics like this and this really give lots of *shudders* detail but whenever im about to write a story i get writers block and my mind goes blank -_-
920839 That is AMAZING. In reality, I am working on becoming an actress (voice actress, preferably). I have only seen pieces of the movie, I read the books instead. Lol. Thanks for reading/commenting.
that story with the party sounds.... amazingly less bad than the cupcake killer stuff......
but you must have done something right it plays out in my head like a film.
702392
Heck yes! I love it when people love my Pinkamena! I hope you like Chapter Four!
735532
Thank you! I really like it when people say that. I just used the moniker and crimes so she would still be a cannibalistic killer like Hannibal Lecter, if that makes sense. Aside from that, I tried to do entirely different stuff with this story.
Pinkamina creeps me the fuck out. Not as much as Hannibal did but your still doing a bloody fine job.
That said I found Rainbows story to be a little... Cartoony I guess. And I know this is a fanfic of a cartoon but it just didn't fit in with the tone of the rest of the chapter as far as I could tell.
Yeah this is getting a like and a fave.
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Yeah, but psychological damage from bullying can be pretty serious. I didn't want to be cliche and have her be an abused filly and in the books Clarice's terrible memory is seeing sheeps slaughtered. I couldn't do anything like that in a animal filled world. So I chose a public embarrassment story. I wish I could have chosen something super awesome but I really couldn't think of it.
Yay a fave!
Another super awesome chapter. This really made my day. Pinkie had me grinning so much with her creepy spaztic nature. I can't wait to see more
There's something very curious about your Pinkamina. She scares me, but at the same time, I want to hug her so badly!
I love that!
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Thank you very much! Yeah! Who doesn't want to join a crazy dead donkey party? Lol. I really appreciate your comments.
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Haha, thanks! I have noticed that most people who write Pinkamena forget her personality as Pinkie Pie or make them two separate entities. I wanted to keep both natures, the vile and frivolous without making her fighting for the same body but rather living cohesively inside of it, even if she is not quite aware of how strange she comes off.
Uhh, was the whole chapter intentionally supposed to be bold?
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No, I fixed it. Thanks for pointing it out.
Yes!! yet another great chapter keep updating i see this story has lots of potential,dear celestia i just wanna give this pinkamina a huge hug i dont even care if i get turned to cupcakes
By the way whats the difference between clop and lemon if its both sexaul?
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Thank you! CUPCAKE HUG!
Well, clop is technically lemon, but it's pony-smut and prior to this I had never written anything but sex with humans. So, it was a bit of a challenge to get the terms right and think about the positions and how it was supposed to work. You know?
753276
As much as i hate to admit it i think im quite capable of getting the terms and the positions right because clopfics like this and this really give lots of *shudders* detail but whenever im about to write a story i get writers block and my mind goes blank -_-
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I wrote them as humans first then changed the terms.
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"Perhaps"
920839
That is AMAZING. In reality, I am working on becoming an actress (voice actress, preferably). I have only seen pieces of the movie, I read the books instead. Lol. Thanks for reading/commenting.
This chapter was appropriately disturbing. Keep it up!
I need more pinkameana flirting with dash or mabey some more stuff with raritys situation some kind of update even if it's just a blog post