Linkinshire
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Basically, you want to have a "hand clenching around his reins"; "reigns" is what Prince Blueblood thinks he should be doing. (Which he shouldn't, of course.)
This does look promising, and I'll look in as it proceeds.
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Ha! Serves me right for writing after a few drinks! Thank you for pointing that abominable error out. I think it ought to be fixed now.
And thank you too for following this story.
^do you see it?
Regardless... This is pretty good. Writing from AJs perspective is a talent of yours... Although in mah personal opinion I'm thinking' y'all need ta fill in a few g's. We country folk dont cut every one of them, y'all hear?
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I've only been learning actual grammar techniques for about a year so my knowledge is... bad at best. Do enlighten me though! I'd love to know where I'm going wrong!
Erm... I'm not sure if I'm honest.
Also, mah thinkin' is from when Ah hear it in mah head and there ain't no 'g' sounds hangin' 'round when Ah imagine it, if y'all see what Ah'm gettin' at? Ah jus' can't help how Ah'm hearin' it, even if it ain't all that accurate!
Though, having never known anybody who speaks like AJ outside of MLP itself, my brain is a very unreliable source and thinking about it now, I have no idea where the 'g' would actually go even I attempted to include it...
But anyway, thanks for the advice! I'll try and work on figuring it out.
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Take out the 'is Kicks'. And you're fine, I suppose. Its just a little messy trying to read it. Ah could help ya out if'n ya want my help?
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Thanks! I made the correction and it does read a lot smoother.
And yeah, that'd be fantastic! I'd be really grateful for your help on this.
I hope this story continues,it just made my favorites,this is great
Change somepony to to someone. They're humans now. Other than that, loved it!
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I kind of hope I'll get the time to continue it too. It was a lot of fun to write and I'm very glad you enjoyed it enough to fav it.
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Thanks for the comment but all I could find was an 'anypony' hidden in there. I guess that's what happens when all you write is ponies.
But thank you again for pointing it out and I'm glad you like it.
Love it! Just like all of your stories, it seems.
Hope this one continues!
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Thank you very much! Your kind words are always appreciated.
And I suspect this story will. I very much enjoyed writing the first chapter and it'd be a shame for it to trail off so soon.
Besides I've been severely neglecting my favourite shipping and they really deserve more love from me.
He has the nasty habit of kickin' out if he gets to anxious.
^too
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Thanks for pointing that out. The mistake has now been fixed.
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np. I would also point out the ah'ms and the mah's but now that I think about it, it gives the narration character, cause it seriously looks like aj is the one writing it.
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Yeah, I've always been uncertain about use of 'Ah' instead of 'I' etc. but I think spelling it more phonetically is truer to AJ's character overall and is a little more fitting for her POV. Anyway, I appreciate the compliment and I'm pleased you think it sounds like her!
Dear dear Linkinshire,
You should be more positive about your creations, because I love every single thing of Rarijack you brought out.
I really hope you'll continue this one and all the other amazing fics you did.
This one has a huge potential in being a good Rarijack-fic and certainly one of my favorites!
I wish you only the best and please, bless us with more of your Rarijack
Thank you
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Hey there, friend. That comment of yours has been sat around for 39 weeks and 3 days as of this moment and I've only just got to reading it. I sorely regret not seeing it sooner but a lot of life caught up with me and I'd taken a break from the pony for a while.
With that said, it means an awful lot to me that you enjoyed this story of mine and I hope to get back into the swing of things. I've been writing in my absence so I shouldn't be too rusty (in theory that is). But anyway, thank you for all your kind words. They mean more than you know.
Let the Rarijack ship sail.
OH my stars, this is fabulous!!
I can't wait to see interaction between Rarity and Applejack. The whole vibe of this is great. I love AJ pov stories too. Even if it's human and AU, they are still very much in character and I love it. 
I know you might not be writing anymore, but I would very much love to read more if you ever think about continuing this!!
What happen!??! we need moaaar!!
more bich!!!!!!!!! >:) chara!! language!!!!