The Curse of Rainbow Dash

Am I a bad influence?

So close in making her dream come true, this question roars in Rainbow Dash's troubled mind...

One little pink pony doesn't think so, of course.

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Akavi

Akavi #1 · Dec 20th, 2012 · · ·

So I wasn't the only one to see the Rainbowpie subtext in that episode... Excellent. Very well written and cute, there may have been a few errors here and there but overall I liked how the characters were portrayed. Have a thumb.

Sedgewick

Sedgewick #2 · Dec 20th, 2012 · 1 · ·

Cute. Short. Sweet. Pretty great, I must say. Well written, minus a few errors, but that's nothing too big to dwell on. Well done.

At least I'm pretty sure I caught a few errors... though it is 4 in the morning..

Either way, well done. Very nice.

Damocles23

Damocles23 #3 · Dec 20th, 2012 · · ·

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Well, there was that other story I wrote were the only missing one was Rarity, so I kind of had to even it out this time. Writing on a all Flutters story as we speak, though

Whiles34

Whiles34 #4 · Dec 20th, 2012 · 1 · ·

Very good story! My only problem is that I find your writing style a little hard to read, though it's probably not your fault. Agree with DashForever. You didn't need very strong shipping goggles to see the Pinkiedash in that episode.