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Story seems good.
Yes! Spilight! Let's see where this goes!
I'm only here because of the trigger warning.
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Ah, I hate how they didn't get together at the end. Oh well, the story dove very deep into their thoughts and emotions which was great.
well.....I liked it
Dragon dildos? okayyyy!
Sorry, you're description drew me away from wanting to read this story, I just wanted to ask if your title is a reference to the Hoobastank song?
Well, i may still read this, actually. IDK.
Dat thumbnail. It's so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute.
That was goooooooooood
Me Gusta
Dragon dildos...
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I haven't been reading a ton of clop lately, but I saw the description and it sounded like an awesome story. I started reading and instantly recognized that you are a very good writer. I kept reading and I've actually never cum so hard in my life. Thumbs up, favorite, follow. Amazing work sir, please keep it up.
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oh man, that's what i like to hear
thanks for your kind words, sir
I await a sequel.
Damn it give us a sequel!
There's no way around it, this piece was an experience. I don't think I've read anything like this that was so purely arousing and so well written. This story flowed like Willy Wonka's chocolate river (sans the fat kid) and had a climax more satisfying than... It was really satisfying and I'll absolutely be reading all your work from now on!
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don't forget to like / follow / comment/ subscribe / donate / give me naming rights to your first born / etc.
naw just kidding
glad you liked it man
keep your eye open for requests being open at some point in the future once i clear up my queue if there's something you wanna see written
429628 I didn't think tonight could get much better and then I read your reply
All i can say is that i hope there is a sequal to this...
Now i'm off to browse all of your works across the internet!
...and im just finding you now? the fuck? read all your fics good stuff foosa gonna watch your for sure
Chapter 2 please!!!
Overall, very well done! It was put together quite nicely and I loved the fact that they did not get together in the end.
i demand a sequel
or i will huff and puff and blow your house down
Aww... I really hoped they would end up together :(
Great story, though!
Wha...
It's over?
sequel please!!!
This should be tagged sad.
That was not only well written but also a mixture of heartwarming and bittersweet.
Good work and consider your self Watched.
While I realize I'm a bit late with reading this... I too would like to see a sequel..
I NEED A SEQUEL
Ladies and gentlecolts, we have here....an artites (fuck I can't spell!) bottom line my brother is that this is and will always be very impressive, of course I'm a complete sap for Spike/Twilight romace always but this was pure badass writing, you are amazing, I'm honestly hoping to see a sequel soon, maybe one where they could be together? Spike/Twilight forever!
DAMMIT, Why they no get together?!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png
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I second it!
Do more!
Could've sworn I'd drop a comment here...
This story actually achieves a purpose beyond simple erotica, it actually does have an emotional point to it. Both of them have feelings for each other, but both are too afraid to admit it. It actually INCITES a response from the reader, since it made me wish they'd just come out and admit it.
If this is going to continue (which I doubt with lots of manly tears), I bet they'll be eating dinner one night, then just kind of talk over one another, expressing what they feel in the exact same moment, ala Stark's and Pepperpot's arguments in Iron Man.
But, it's that kind of ending never coming about that really impresses me; it makes the reader want more, but it hurts more when you know it will never come about.
Bottom line, fantastic read, very powerful emotionally, and it gets the ol' process started (I refuse to say the M word on a site based around fan fiction of a bunch of cartoon ponies, same goes for the C word).
I really enjoyed this read...
Please do more
By the way, after reading it about 3 times in a row (for reasons I'm not too sure... part of me wished the story would somehow change if i read it over I guess, lol ) I really feel the strong urge to write either a continuation or altered version of your story....
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That's how good it is. Lol
What's with the change to present tense at the end? It seems deliberate, but one can never be sure.
Oh this is just precious. I like the whole synchronised fantasies and the feels in general. I STRONGLY wish for a cool sequel
I like want a sequel when actually tell each other how they feel.
Awesome work! MORE!!!
Reading through the story and the comments, I can't agree more to two facts:
This story is so awesome It leaves you wanting, hanging on everything, imagining the two together and still gets you off if you do yourself while reading it.
And the second fact is - I want more! A sequel where they get together (through accident or because of a plan that's in your magnificent and skillfull hands (or hoofs or spikes or talons or whatever appendages you would like to have ) or at least more of this story without dragging it on. Like perverted schemes the two of them have, some of their more perverted thoughts all through seemingly normal situations etc.
Please!
Um, if that's okay with you
It's easy to see why so many people hate this paring, but I still can't hep but love it, and this is one of the most enjoyable Spilight fics I've ever read. The thing that makes it more interesting is that these two have to reevaluate their relationship and come to terms with the idea that it's alright to have arousing/romantic feelings for someone whom they're only supposed to have familial feelings for. Their feelings weren't satisfied in this one, but there were vivid-enough descriptions of their daydreams to make up for the lack of actual physical interaction while the end leaves plenty of sexual tension in the air. Well done. If a sequel can be written with just as much substance and skill, I'd kill to see it happen.
I just love SpiLight!
HEY, YOU BASTARD? ANOTHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRR!!! ... I say... if just you can?
This was a cool read. I'm really liking your stories so far. You have got an addict.
ShAT!
CUCK!
FACK!
CINT!
This fic is great! Everything about it is great, even the unsatisfactory ending.
I love it!
MOAR! I DEMAND MOAR!
I'm on a roll with cutefics today :D
really enjoyed the whole switching perspectives (and them thinking the same things about each other)
here's to hoping for a sequel? Although already there are so many stories by you that have amazing sequels I can't complain XD
next up is twilight's gradual descent into sluttiness
oooo long fic now, should be a nice way of finishing my night
So much. BWAHAHAHAHAHHA
Oh my gosh! This is the hottest and sexiest thing I've ever read. Whoa! It was really, really, and I mean really good. :)