Spike, a little purple dragon, has a problem.
He started seeing a pony he knows from birth, in another way.
He knows he shouldn't.
But his heart tells him other ways
Can love bloom between them?
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Love is like that, isn't it, sister? Grabs you, and gets you dusted before you even know...
Your writing is pretty terrible in terms of grammar, but I do get feels when reading this. Your story has a lot of soul but needs a LOT of polishing up
You know what?
I like this! I really do!
HA! Rarity just fucked up now!
BELIEVE ME MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW I WISH THAT COULD HAVE WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice story I loving this story you epic writer you!
Ok, first off, I want to say this is a great story idea, and I want to see where this goes!
Secondly, while it is a great idea, the writing and grammar
could useneedssomea lot of work. It is still fairly easy for me to follow, but I think you could attract more people if you worked on grammar!cdn.derpiboo.ru/media/BAhbBlsHOgZmSSIsMjAxMi8xMC8yOS8wNF8yMV8zOV82NDNfMTM1NDcyX19VTk9QVF9fBjoGRVQ/135472__safe_fluttershy_image-macro_reaction-image_no.jpg.jpg
Tense confusion.
Please get an editor, and slow the story down. I'm not going to downvote or upvote yet, but please have somebody go through this.
1908953 Damn, you're everywhere
As for this story, I'm really impressed, but it seems really rushed, trey to slow this down a bit and double check your work before you post, I'll be staying around because you have my favorite pairing ever
Damn, poor Spike, be sure to get an editor for this story, other then that you are doing a very great job, damn.....poor Spike, this is just heart breaking, why does Twilight not love him?
2065437 Everywhere?
Not yet..................................................
If she doesn't care for Spike it will haunted her for the rest of her life.
Damn, poor Spike, that is just cruel a few errors, here and there but really not bad. I would suggest asking for help in a proof reader or editor group maybe. And damn Rarity, way to lead the poor guy on, Twilght really loved him to, that's just cruel...hoping to see how this will turn out though.
Oh dear such troubled emotions yet it is good none the less!
Such a good story...I hope it will be updated soon
I like the idea, but the bad grammar is too much. Reading stories isn't very fun when it's a chore. You need an editor, put simply, and if you get one I may come back and finish this story.....until then, I'm outta here. Best of luck on writing your stories; you've got this far, so you've got one foot in the door. Now all ya need is better grammar and/or an editor
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