i'm a brony who just wants to have fun, and make stuff people can enjoy
This story is a sequel to Pinkie Pie's Secret
Pinkie Pie still has her crush on Spike, But his birthday is coming up, perfect time to give him his special present.
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well this will be a fun night for spike.
i wounder what pinkie plans for spikes after party
This is a very interesting story... but there needs some serious fixing.
Spike's name was mentioned in this paragraph twice, and the capitalization was only used correctly once.
I'll and I need to be capitalized.
Capitalization.
Capitalization.
Capitalization!!!!!!!
And Applejack is one word. rainbow dash- needs to be Rainbow Dash. And more capitalization.
This again is a really nice fic-but it needs a proofreader. Editor. Anything.
I'd be more than happy to look over the rest of this, and help you. Just... look over it, and fix the mistakes, and it will make this a outstanding story.
3373092 we haven't even thought that far, but i'ts going to be a surprize to every pony even me
3372879 it is, that picture....
3373838 okay 1. it was a colab. 2. i hate long thisn't like that. "the capitalization was bad, please improve it" would do fine.
and lastly, it was 2 in the morning. se were tired and i was trying my best
and we did sometimes put the same name twice
3374847 i shall try my best!!! *sees cover art*
this is going to be hard
Very hurry, rewrite and do all more slow.
3374993 you person,
PM
3374826 Okay,okay- I was just trying to be nice about it. Please chill.
And secondly, I understand it was two in the morning, but you couldn't spare a few more hours to reach a proofreader? (Not to mention to not have ants in your pants to get it published?)
I know it was a colab- I saw that in the introduction. But you two should have the decency to look it over.
But like I said, I liked it, and want you to keep up the good work.
hey are you ready for a another chapter?
3376117 no i need to edit this to make the human who dosen't care about anything other than grammar
3375883 frankly i've gone over the edge. your opinion about the grammar of this story dosen't matter to me. if the story is good, and the grammar is bad, i don't care a story is a story.
so just realize your not the center of my world or this fic.
3376774 Well, GOOD. Didn't realize you wanted to be a fucking pansy about this! I'm sorry- but you are asking me to be mean about this.
When I started out-I was instructed with my stories like so. All I want you to be is better, but you're being a bitch about it. Why?
You know what? I don't care- you're clearly not a native english speeker. I shouldn't have to be a bitch. But this is what happens. I'm evil- and it's clearified in my very name. So suck it up.
And thanks for mentioning me as:
I've said over and over that I love the fic. But now I've revoked my like of the story. Welcome to FIMfiction, jackass.
3376822 i sugest you watch what you say, thats very horrible word choice, and i'm about read to delete it.
so please, stop swarring. its also a stupid thing to do
3376832 As you say.
*takes a bow*
But even though you delete that comment, it Was there, and it will stick to you forever. I promise.
Nothing anyone says goes away. Ever.
EXPECIALLY WHEN IT COMES TO ME.
3376844 listen, i could care less whether its still there or not. or even if i know its there. its just realy inappropriate, to use that kind of language in the chats, on a fic for everypony.
*takes a keel* if you would mind me, i have some Apple Bloom Abuse to finish
. P.S. i could care less what you do from here on, as long as its not really inappropriate)NSFW(.
3376769 oh okay my friend i'll wait patiently then
3376875 i feel like the fight was useless before you go off at me
not to shout 
.
i like it the next chapter is gowning to be awesome
how i feel abut your fight song: High School Never Ends
it did not work
before you go off at me i like the story here have a huge pinkie
well, a lil quick for my taste but, likin t fic so far
keep up t good work n' can't wait for t next chappie 
3385894 thank
and your coment gave me so much problems i enjoyed it
it was fun yo read
3385912
but, if u want i can try n' mak it moar understandble? 
ur welcome
3385959 noz!!!
i enjoyed it like that 
as much as i enjoy 
3385977
ok ok i'll leave it be 
but, let me know if u don't understand anythin, k? 
3385995
that dose that mean?
okay i will
okay my friend i'm waiting for you
i'm really busy right my friend so can you wait for me?
3514475>>3514488 i want on. we need luck to get time to write the next part
i got all da luck in the world. sdo you have luck?
3519417 i'm not sure if i do my friend i'm really busy with school right now do i' really sorry but right now i got time so i'm ready when you are
3520208 thierare going to be a lot of problems writing this.
i'f your on and ready, we can try/
You have my attention....lets see if you can earn it fully
3523151thats good
. we will try out best
Will wait for this to start up again
3601882 glad to here
it's not going to get an update anytime soon
completely difrent sceduales
Loving it! But it's now time to play the waiting game lol. No rush and take your time.
3665244 it's a colab. i need to have my partner. and we have sceduals lke the sun and mon
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You must continue the story! You must!!!!
MOOOOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4626565 YES MUCH MUCH MMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
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GREAT SHIP
you must continue, the hiatus is going to be the death of me.
When is the next update?
Well no new chapter, account banned :/