It's Hearths Warming Eve and Pinkie threw a Heaths Warming Eve party! After Spike learned Rarity didn't share feelings, he takes an interest on the beautiful Fluttershy.
-No connection with What Doesn't Kill You
-One shot Hearths Warming story
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This is a nice and simple FlutterSpike story.
The dialogue towards the beginning between Spike and Fluttershy felt a little forced.
Erm, perhaps a bit more description there?
Was a little cliché.
This is definitely the best Flutterspike one-shot I have read thus far. Actually, I've only read one or two others so I guess that doesn't mean much.
All in, this was a great fic. I loved the flow of events, especially the 'getting warm' scene.
SO. CUTE.
Shouldbbe a comma, not a period, between the first two sentences. The third sentence could have been structured better (a little description, slow realisation etc.), but I loved this part. Good 'ol Twilight, always there to help out. Spike's gotta thank her later on.
Phew, when i waa writing this I thought I did a bad job good to hear it wasnt garbage
Nice one-shot, but I found something you may want to edit. At one point, you had Fluttershy say "No on" instead of "No one".
love all ya storys tony
Awwwwwww
awesome shypike
My favorite Spike shipping.. Awesome story