How can a sardonic dragon, a bookworm of an alicorn, and a timid pegasus possibly live under one roof as a herd? Well, only one way to find out.
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I'm a noob who wishes to entertain you ( hopefully) with my stories. I'm a huge Spilight and Appledash shipper, and I hope you enjoy my writings. Kthxbye.
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This is looking good. Can't wait to see more
Guess it's time to mail Fluttershy again. Damn public transportation costs too much.
Otherwise, this was a great fic and I would like nothing more than for you to continue it.
You definitely have something interesting here. Although I feel you should write something without expecting to become anything big or what people might like. Not saying what you have is bad, just continue on regardless of how people feel about it. You can focus on that once the story is actually finished.
Whoa whoa whoa. Back the truck up. You stole the title of my story, dude. Not cool, man, not cool.
Huh, didn't think I see this kind of story with a rated E tag. Either way this looks good and off to a great start.
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It happens, brother. There have been a dozen stories named Variables, The Talk, and On Pins and Needles since I wrote those stories. I know it doesn't feel good, but people will know the difference between the narratives. That's why people usually refer to the author along with the story.
It seems like a good start and a good set-up, especially if we can see a few more flashbacks, maybe of some ups and, especially, downs of their relationship (The reactions of their friends/family, the public in general, maybe problems with the press, as they are celebrities).
4449792 Yeah, I know. I wasn't actually upset. I'm more surprised than anything since It Takes Three to Tango isn't the actual phrase.
This is good! I can't wait to read more
Cute, simple and to the point, this is a good start.
Can't wait to see some *Dawwwwww* cuddle moments between the three =D
I think that this story would lose something with outright clop mixed in. Right now there's an almost innocent romantic feel. Indirect innuendo would be fine though. It would be a shame to lose it's sweetness.
--Spade
Great chapter! Also I agree with Spade, don't add clop right now. Maybe latter in the story.
Cute chapter
love it!
Something... Concerns me about these chapters. They seem fluttershy oriented. That's not a bad thing, but Twilight and Spike had been on a date only a few times before and the stablitliy of the relationship is kinda sketchy in my mind. If we aren't supposed to think about that, fine, I can toss away that thought. But are we to assume an unstable relationship? Or is it... Okay? While one is good for drama, you would have to deal with either an emotionally compromised dragon or an apathetic one, neither and easy topic to approach. The other while great for plot reasons kinda leaves it a bit cut and dry. That's just a little concern on my part.
Also, they have been going out for a while now. Making the assumption that they have been together intimately for a number of times is a justifiable assumption. My question is are they going to have a child soon? Would you even touch on that subject? Or is it going to be soul shattering that even with the help of magic they can't have children.
4490011 I really didn't consider these things. I expected this to be real fluffy and comedic, however, that could be a good stand-alone story. I'll maybe do darker stuff with this ship in the future, but right now this is my first story and I don't want to get overly-ambitious.
I wonder what Twi and Flutters' reactions will be when he says that it went extremely well, only threatening to banish them to Gryphious, and with some clothes, too!
Yes to clop, but it have to gently stir into it. You have an excellent example now of how a romance should be--nice, paced to the taste of the characters. Don't rush it--otherwise it would be out of place and it would have taken a bit of the tone of this story.
I have to agree with the others, there will be a point when clop would be at the right time, but that isn't until much, MUCH later, if not at all (implying it). Take your time with this. You have a beautiful story going....don't ruin it by doing something rash.
lol
you don't mess with momma Celly 
Wait! Did they told their friends about this relationship?
Good job. This is pretty light and on the happy side, which is hard to find nowadays. Everyone is stuck wanting drama, conflict, suspense. This is like a reprive of it all, nice and calming. I really need more like this.
You guys are insane! 600 views, 43 favs, and no end in sight for this story! This is so much more popular than I'd ever hope and I was afraid people wouldn't like the shipping, but those fears are out to rest. Thank you all!
Sweet, romantic, and often hilarious. I highly enjoy this fic and can't wait for more.
Most excellent.
Imma follow this. And if possible I'd like to see this trio as parents.
Yeah I agree, I think it's going to be awesome.
Daaaaaaaaamn 'Tia! Overprotective much?
4449792 I get the first two but On Pins and Needles surprises me.
4685282 Hey, she DID take it pretty well according to Spike.
I think you could do a side story with all the clops this couple had. I wonder why she is 'auntie' I mean that seems like that would cause issues with their relationship and it seems it would hurt her to not be seen as the child mother. Kinda makes her seem not as important to the relationship as Twilight is but I might be overthinking it lol. I think it would be interesting to see the three of them have to deal with the representative from the dragon nations and they have a problem with a dragon being with ponies. You could also do one where Spike is sick so Twilight and Shy dress up as nurses and take care of him for a day. There can also be their first trip together as a couple where they go have fun but they must overcome the looks they are getting for being with a dragon.
4711735 I figured Auntie would be a better solution in case he ever needed something specifically from Twilight or Fluttershy and he had something to call them without confusing them.
Glad my idea got used! Really made my day!
4711755 Yea but I mean when your mom is one of the princess that run the kingdom and your father is a dragon she known since birth I think normal is out of the window lol.I would think having momma Twilight and momma Shy would be the most normal think of their relationship lol
But as I said it is a small thing I just thought of as I was reading it. You could have a chapter when they find out Spike is about to enter his 'breeding period' so they have to prepare for it. They then jump a week later and the other girls come over since and they just see a spent Twi and Shy lol.
4711841 You really wanna see some clop I take it.
4711855 Lol not as bad as that might have made it sound. I am cowriting a story with someone and we have been working on this clop scene for a while to make it perfect so I kinda have clop on the brain right now. The funny thing it is not in 'that way' I am thinking about it.
I knew it!!! Twister, the most intimate and dirty game ever conceived. At least to Flutters
You rascal! You had me convinced they were going to do 'it'. *mutters* clever, clever, clever.
Bravo good sir! Bravo indeed!
AHA! PLOT TWIST!
okay, didn't expect this end, but nice played
It was hilarious. Most excellent chapter.
Called it haha twister!
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You know at first I was hesitate to read it cuz of the poly thing but I'm glad I took the time to read this. And I enjoy it very much, can't wait to see more of their stories.
Perhaps in the next chap or in the future chaps, you can make Twi & Shy both preggers and Spike managing with their hormones & craving & such ? 
4824036 Sorry to tell you, but Chapter 7 sorta deals with why I can't make that chapter, but thank you for taking a chance on me, it really means a lot to me.
I see what you did there.
Oh Celly will get over it once she gets a visit from the grandchildren
A promising start.
OK, that just... doesn`t mesh. I`ve been willing to overlook many small gaffes in previous chapter, but this is just too much. Have a dislike for having no comprehension of characterisation.
THAT FyayING BAIT AND SWITCH!!
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Haha
This was a pure joy to read. Sometimes it’s nice to simply enjoy a light, fluffy shipfic.