• Member Since 4th Mar, 2013
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trahzo


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After the death of many citizens in Equestria, Pinkamena now intends on leaving, but not before being confronted by the only one she spared outta love in her dark onslaught, Spike! this would be the shipping name: Spikamena. Teen, because I may have put in a little swearing.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

It's good that you're writing, but I honestly think you could benefit from reading a book every now and then. And if you do read, try to find something other than a 4chan board. Have a nice day. :twilightsmile:

>mfw I read this entire story

~Blinkie

What in the name of God was that? Well at least there wasn't a red and black alicorn OC!!!!

slightly better than I expected from your other works... but that's not saying much

Wow. This is complete shit. There is no amount of constructive criticism I could offer that could help you. The only thing that would help this would be a roll of toilet paper. And some air freshener.

Complete shit. Just...wow.

Why do all Spinkies involve Pinkie killing everyone first? :rainbowlaugh:

I'm going to have to agree with other comments: there are too many errors here for me to point out in a simple comment.

This needs a lot of work. :unsuresweetie:

plenty of room toexpand and make this a better one-shot even if you were creating this at what 2 in the morning?

4570820 Oooh, low blow...

just nope nope and nope denied:ajbemused:

4573324 Those are the ones that win fights :trollestia:

This............is...............weird............:rainbowhuh:

That twas ..... um ...... odd?:rainbowhuh:

That was so bucking terrible! If somepony else decides to make a FIMfic that bad...
I will go bucking insane!:pinkiecrazy:

..... I really need to copy and delete everything i just read in the last 5 minutes of my life....:ajsleepy:

I like the name Passionate Party! What does Passionate look like?

I liked the ending. Except for the bit about the winged sot.

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