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TheLoveless


i'm a brony who just wants to have fun, and make stuff people can enjoy

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If you give Derpy a muffin, she will want another. When she wants another, she will want to be your friend. When she wants to be your friend, would you accept?

This changeling sure would love to have a friend, even a derpy mare like Derpy.

This story is based around not discriminating.

EDITED BY: David Brony

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Comments ( 35 )

Is this.....
Is that changeling....
Is this a story about me!?!?!
*Muffins rain from the sky*
I knew one day it would happen!

3404721
Are you at every story I come to? And you just so happen to bring your muffin machine with you?

:facehoof:

Side note: I loved the book this was based on as a foal and am ecstatic this fic was written.

If you don't mind, I can take the downloaded file and send it to you tomorrow after I'm done editing this for grammar and conventions. Would that be fine with you?

Sincerely yours,
David Brony :facehoof:

3404758
My question is still unanswerd....

3404785
I can't find the question you mentioned in my inbox or in my notifications tab, so which question is that? :rainbowderp:

3404797
......
*points down at the first comment*

3404812
I believe that question was not directed at me, therefore I did not answer it, as I am not the author of this fanfic.:twistnerd:

As for MY answer, I shall answer your question with another question:
IS this story about you? :duck:

3404830
Seems oddly similar dont you think,
Changeling....
Muffins....
Derpy....
Sound familiar?

I'm gonna read this tomorrow. I'm leery, though. Any author who thinks its good practice to spell out the story's intent in its description probably isn't a good writer.
And I'm too-prepared to eat my words should I be wrong. :derpytongue2:

3404721 oh for the love of... This story is not about you, you are a nimrod

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw....
Just like derpy :derpytongue2:

3405002
:facehoof: i cant look but yes most people are like the ones that bully me.:applecry:not much eneymore but still. And this story is awsome nice meaning nice note i like.:pinkiesad2:

This was cute. I'm glad i read it before going to bed.

3404776 that'd be fine:twilightsheepish: but only if you want to:unsuresweetie:

3404721>>3404758>>3405002

truth be told this storry is about me:eeyup: you probly couldn't tell but i am being spike for a while.:eeyup:

3404853 spelling out the meaning for the story in the discription?

well last story i wrote that wasn't like this )a ship fic( some one was reading it and commented about it:eeyup: plus its to yuo know in advance:facehoof: don't eat your words:eeyup:

3405438 :rainbowlaugh: yes, :derpytongue2:X:muffins: :yay:

3405667 :eeyup: like i say, people are evil, and mean:fluttercry:.

3405748 thanks for thinking its cute:twilightsmile:

3405943
but you got that one or two people:twilightsmile:but dont get them mixed up for as i call changlengs thay pretend to be your frend then before you know it a fist is thrown at you. that's how i got into my first fight that b*** got two hits before i defend and win not hurd but enath to hert:raritycry: and she sead "does that hert ?"
me"yes"..second hit.."yes stop" and we fught but i won my reaction by the fact shes bigger than me:rainbowderp:

3405930
Oh im gana sue sompony
*Takes out a briefcase and opens it*
Heres my settlement terms.
*Hands you a muffin with the words.....*
More muffins!
*...On it*

3406349 how can you sue me fr being myself?:duck: its imposible.:ajbemused:

don't claim whats not yours, it will comeback and ruin your life:twilightsmile:

lesson to learn: don't screew with my muffins

3406664
*Sitting on a pile of muffins*
Wait...
Dont claim what isnt yours?
*Looks at the muffins which all say*
Dont touch my muffins, love derpy.
Uh oh...
*A grey shadow looms on the horizon*
Not the face!!!
*Today Soft shell learned a valuable lesson*
If your going to steal muffins, dont steal from derpy...

3405930
Soft and I were just playing a game. He is determined to bring me over to the muffin side, I tell you. As for editing this, I just saw your message and you should expect it in your inbox this evening.

3406701 okay thanks.:eeyup:

soft.... okay, i will game with him if he has the rigth games, and stuff:twilightsheepish:)bord(

3406699 true that:twilightblush: *eats muffin:eeyup:*:moustache:

i'd like to play a game with you:eeyup:

3406727
Also, was the title and description a play on the children's book, If You Give A Mouse A Cookie?

3406749 pritty much:twilightsmile: it didnt realy follow the book though:fluttershysad:

3406755
The edited copy is up with the same name in my unpublished stories. Hope you use it here! :twilightsmile:
(link in my blog, first time doing this so if I'm doing it wrong tell me)

3405942

I...don't know what you're trying to tell me. :facehoof:
I got the part about a shipping fic--they're not the bane of existence, if they're well-written--and something about not eating my words.
Is it some kind of fore-warning, or what? :rainbowhuh:

Omg loved this!!! :applecry: (these are tears of joy!)

3410612 nnot sure, but people will read a fic sometimes and it woun't be what they expected and dislike it.:unsuresweetie:

its been a week since i've been on)more or less a week( so i don't know what i was trying to do, hope you enjoyed it:moustache:

3413423 glad you liked it. :eeyup: (:fluttercry: joy!!!!)

thanks for the fave(if our the one who faved it:twilightsheepish:)

This made me feel warm and happy....if only for a very brief moment. :pinkiehappy:

Ohhhh, Hugs! I need hugs!

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