What can go wrong when you are friends with a Princess? Nothing can go wrong, when Luna's the princess! Using magic to get something you love never worked out better.
Apple Bloom learns that lesson the best way posible
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TheLoveless
i'm a brony who just wants to have fun, and make stuff people can enjoy
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What I like about this story, very well written.
What I HATED was that there was no love triangle going on between Applebloom, Spike, and Princess Luna. Also the feels were the other thing I hated in this story.
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glad you enjoyed my first well writen story.
as for the love triangle, no. spike and only one mare.
yu got feels?
tell me! where are these feels!?
A little sappy, but hey she's a CMC. We all know that they always end up in sap.
3629606 truth be told, i'm trying to be less negative so,
i really don't see how that is sappy. 
3629606 just realized. you didn't complain about the usual migrain
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Maybe I'm not as tired as I usually am at this time of day. I understood the story after I realized why she had Luna make the moon blue. It's cute but using "the moon is blue because of you" is a tad sappy. I'm not meaning it as a bad thing because love stories have sappy love lines.
3629801oh
I love these kind of cute stories!
These have the purest, most innocent kind of love and always coax a soft smile from my face. 
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Feels are like when you look at something cute or read something cute, you feel a tingling sensation in your body and you go HNGGGGH at what you just saw and read.
3631038oh
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Yeah. Well take care The Loveless.
3631507 will try
SIR YOU HAVE CAUGHT MY ATTENTION WITH THE BEST CMC SHIP. I SHALL GIVE MY THOUGHTS AFTER READING. BUT FIRST HAVE A SPIKESTACHE
Alright thoughts......It was.....good. Personally thought that it could have been a little bit longer, so it could have a bit more detail But all in all it was good!
3632496 taste strange
3632517 glad to hear. i'm not into long stories
sorry
It was a bit confusing...
4512949
not the first i've been told that. i've been meaning to fix them up 
Very cute story. Made me smile alot.
Is there even any clop in this?
Everyone needs a little love...and this fic deserves a bit more. Have a like.