After Rarity falls for a new prince, Spike is infuriated for wasting five years of his life trying to please her. So Twilight, being the good friend she is, decides to calm him down as much as she can. However, she may have been a little too nice to him, because later that night Spike begins to have romantic dreams about her. At first they horrify him, but eventually he begins to like them. Then he finally begins to understand why he keeps having these dreams; he's beginning to fall in love with his best friend, but will she return his affection or leave him out in the cold like Rarity?
[Image is made by jenasu on Deviantart.]
Chapters (8)
A Completely Irrelevant Remix
dat cover, why its so familiar?
cant wait for more
806748 Why you...
806776
wat?
806793 ...
Never mind...
806798
okay
806748 It's part of the Spike x Twilight clop flash game by ButtercupSaiyan. Also a standalone image, as you can see.
806810
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Also, Trackin'!!!!
806823 files.myopera.com/drlaunch/albums/37656/ya-rly001.jpg
I bought the game myself. It is nice, even if you don't like Spilight fics.
806810 Itis? I got it from deviant art and it wasn't clop at all...
806837 That's because you don't have the game. BCS made an entire game and that's the opening scene from it.
If you want, I can link you to the demo
806829
Hey im a fan of Spilight
806839 I'm both terrified and tempted...
806844 I was saying that I'm not. Sorry for the misdirection of thoughts made with that comment
806847 I'll pm ya the link and you can decide what you wanna do with it dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
I really like it. Please write more!
Is that a real song, there? It sounds... familiar.
great story so far
806887 Breakaway by Kelly Clarkson.
806861 Thank you!
I hope to have chapter two up by tomorrow.
806895 Thanks.
She reads books with over two thousand words?
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806992 FFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Meant pages.
806996
Too late, I saw it
807004 So you're the only one who noticed it eh?
807012
HERES PIKIE PIE!!! 
Run!
I prefer the first image, the one made by BCS :v
806802 Poor bastard's writing a Twispike... I'm sure it'll be as brilliant as this one is so far.
807571 I'm guessing I'm the poor basterd...
807604 Yeah well I've seen a few comments around. Just checked out the first chapter by the way sir/ma'am, and it is fantastic! Can't wait to hear more!
Yeah, this made my entire morning, as I'm well aware you should know becuase of how big of a fan of I am. Other then one word that is supposed to be a capatile T for Twilight's name, every thing is 100% solid, I thought that the song was very heart warming, I really, realy loved this story and I will be reviwing each and every chapter, Ice. Please keep writing more, for the love of Spilight!!!
Spike + Twilight
= FOREVER!!!
A TwiSpike eh? Always willing to give these a go. Nice opening chapter I have to say.
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Could you PM me the link, too?
I would be very appreciative... I mean, if that's alright...
(Now to actually read the story instead of the comments...)
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM TIME! Not much to say, really... just stuff like this:
"“Ah here we go,” she said to herself, in an accomplished tone."
^ The "in an accomplished tone" part was rather unnecessary and just made it too wordy. I'm not sure if you did it a lot elsewhere, but that was the first time I noticed it.
Instead, just go with something along the lines of...
"[...]she said, smiling to herself."
Something like that.
Pet peeves having been dealt with now, I must say I am probably going to enjoy this story a lot... Faved and Thumbed.
I like this story, but i have a total of two issues with it.
1. "‘Thank god’ he thought as he backed away from the trash can." I don't know if there is an Equestrian god, but I usually use "Celestia" as a replacement... just cuz.
2. I always double space my paragraphs, but I don't know if that's correct. If you don't want to, then I'll just shut up and keep reading, because its not that bad. It's just something I prefer.
Good start, awaiting moar with vigor!
808703 Wet folds
808908 And dripping sexes...
808908 Well I've always found the little praise Celestia thing a little... Weird so I just use god instead...
809471 That's all good. Maybe there is an Equestrian god?
806839 Link me to the demo please, I HAVE to read it!!! Or play it, or whatever.
809739 I heard that.....you my dear friend have amazing taste in pairings
809471>>809483 You know Ice, I got to say, he/she has a point...I mean not that it matters but they ARE animals...not sure if animals have the same god as humans...and there are NO humans in MLP: Fim, ya know.
810818 Eh I still think Celestia as there god is weird...
810810 My reaction was: http://www.videobash.com/video_show/2-girls-1-cup-soulja-boy-reaction-5766
810823 Well true....by why not use another animal god such as ummm....who was the father of both Luna and Celestia again? King...Solies? I think, I'm not sure....
And it's their.
810831
I....I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD I FELL OFF MY BUCKING CHAIR......HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA........
811000 I thought you might...
810831 But it's Spike/Twilight....was it really that bad? I mean...is it romantic, or it just crazy bucking clop? I'm twenty years old to let you know...I MIGHT be able to handle it.....if not then I'll let you know and HOPEFULLY for the love of the gods it won't change the way I think about Spikelight because I seriously love that pairing.