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When two friends have been best friends for as long as they can remember, certain aspects seem impossible or can be hidden from each other. But over time, emotions and feelings can change. What will this mean for Spike and Twilight Sparkle, and will they be the only ones who are changing their feelings?
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Yay Spilight.
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Thanks, hope you enjoyed it.
2646635 Oh, I did.
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I like a nice Spilight story and this is pretty good. I'm humored by Twilight and Spike denying the fact they look like a pair as they do.
Nice set up. But it feels very, very rushed. It's the frist freaking day on the first freaking chapter.
Is not bad. But slow down a bit.
I enjoyed this story, can hardly wait for more.
Honestly a seriously beautiful idea and I love this pairing with all my heart, seriously, it's what even got me into MLP and I have read every single Spilight ever made, no joke.
Though this honestly does need an editor, remember to separate when others are speaking and it seems a bit....basic, might want to change that a little bit.
I would recommend you get an editor. Though I shall be reading and reviewing each and every chapter, honestly excited for more, but please, think carefully on how you wish to continue this and try to be more original in your ideas my friend
TwiSpike? HELL YEAH!
oooooooooow ;A; niceeeeeeeeeeee
How old is Spike in this story
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Umm maybe a year or two older than in the show, he has grown a little bit though, atleast enough to out grow his basket.
That was really cute and your pacing is really good, there wasn't too much romance to fast or anything, it has a nice steady pace. I cant wait for more!
Cute
Oh-hoh. Oh yes. You have peaked my interest quite a bit. You must continue.
The snowed in trope... always liked that one actually.
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What can I say, some cliches are handy
Please sir, may I have another?
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In due time, glad you enjoyed
Derp
The grammar could use some work but this looks pretty good. Keep at it.
Also, you shouldn't put "sigh" inside the dialogue, it's an act of exhaling.
ah the classic snowed in and taking care of sick loved one trope
i look forward to reading more
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the derpiest
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DAMN I actually thought i did this time
, sigh next time then
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Didnt realize the troupe was so common......my bad, anyway thanks for enjoying
oh there is nothing bad about it, like i said it's a classic
and it's not as common as you might think, if anything it's not used as often as it should be, so kudos to you 
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Well thank you friend, I hope you enjoy the story until it's finished and beyond.
Hmm, as a fan of Spilight I like where this is going
I'm really interested to find out how Rarity will react to Twi & Spike's blooming romance 
On a more technical note: the story is plagued with small grammatical errors (like writing "starring" instead of "staring"; these words mean two different things!) and an occasional weird sentence here and there. I shall provide you with an example:
I don't think that a gaze can perform any direct actions; it is Spike who can direct his gaze anywhere he pleases. I'd suggest you to rewrite this sentence into something like this: The dragon locked his gaze on the moon illuminating the sky, its soft radiance spilling through the window into their room, calming him and clearing his thoughts.
rarity is going to be very upset when she returns, twilight stole her spikey-wikey, that is the WORST.POSSIBLE.THING.
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Thanks for the head up, grammar in anything I write will forever haunt me I swear.
About the story, well....let's just say that Rarity will be a very big plot point upon her return
Damn, talk about hidden feelings, I love this, the mere fact that both are loving the other in romantic light and yet are to afraid to act on it, priceless way to question one's love, I very much enjoy it
Though you have errors though should really be looked over by an editor, nonetheless, very impressed
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Thank you, In my first fic the love was all established in the first chapter, this story need a lot of build up and obvious denial, I hope you enjoy the next chapter too
worth a read, thats what I thought at first.
must have MOAR! I say now
1. im glad the last bit wasn't a dream. 2. I cant wait for more !
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Hehe glad you enjoy, look out for more, it'll get even more intense
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I hope you won't be disappointed
woooooooooow nice chap !!!!!!!!
cant wait for next chapter
love it love love it
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Thanks
It may be a grammar mistake but I laughed.
:D
What's Rarity going to do to Spike ?
DUN DUN DUN !!
gah hate rarity so much, she always does this. why cant she ever just let spike love someone else
uh oh Rarity what r u going to do
lucky bastard
So the story so far as been one of my favorite reads so far but the feels weren't there.
She reached out her hoof towards the door as she softly muttered a lone word from her mouth; "Spike..."
Then that happened and the flood gate burst open.
I hope the next chapter comes soon!
Rarity boss fight incoming!
don't you fucking ruin this for me Rarity! don't you fucking dare!
And in the next chapter... CATFIGHT
oh yeah! time for a cat fight, come on twilight, show that prissy unicorn what happens when you mess with the element of magic's boyfriend.
