05.05.2019 - Creating new story titled: Root of Discharmony. Spilight as usual with a touch of Fluttercord and a sprinkle of Cheesepie ;) 4/26 Chapters done :D
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Hearts and hooves day is near... soon, love will fill the air of the small town but will it be the same for two inhabitants of Golden Oak Library? Read to find out!
A simple Spilight oneshot writen by me when I should have been sleeping... Enjoy, rate and review!
A/N: Sorry again for mistakes, english isn't my native and there was no beta reading. If you want to correct this story send me PM. I would gladly accept improvements!
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The feels.
I hope you write more stories, this was awesome
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And all this could have been avoided with a simple pair of goggles.
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Silly Twi, that's science 101.
But seriously, good story.
3488311>>3488515>>3488555>>3488589>>3488713 So much praise
and here I thought this story was medicore at best. Glad you all enjoyed it, I'm really happy! Seriously, there is nothing more a writer such as myself could wish for! 
Bravo!
i enjoyed that 
I
want more
3488838 Glad to read it!
3488849 Oh, there will be more, I don't plan to quit writing anytime soon
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Spilight > Sparity
Great fic and it was adorable. Peace out.
This was fucking beautiful...... good lord bless you
3488867 Agreed! Poor Twi needs Spike!
3488872 Really happy to see you enjoyed it! I'll try to make the next one just as beautiful
I'd just like to point out that the appearance of whiteness in the eyes is a product of having cataracts. There's no reason for Twilight's eyes to be of any unusual coloration, given the cause of her blindness.
3488919 I agree there is no reason for change of coloration, but I planned to go for more visual effect (since I already use magic) that would make her blindness sound more serious for readers
3488733 No problem.
Honestly not bad, was going to say something about how I really doubt finding out one's heart desire can affect their ability to see or not if blinded but eh, it's all chill. It's short, sweet and to the point, very well made, some errors here and there but well done, I love Nurse Redheart and glad she was in this, for once none of Twi's friends needed to be all around her, glad to know, it was getting annoying with them all being together with they got real life shit to deal with
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I thought it was kind of obvious myself. The elixir didn't show her her soulmate, but rather blinded her until she kissed her soulmate. It's a Beauty and the Beast type thing only with blindness instead of transformation.
3489355 Well, I must admit that its not my most mysterious plotline fic seeing as it is only a simple oneshot
What I aimed for is: Sweet, short and obvious fic that will show how close Twilight and Spike are and that goal was achieved. Sadly, it seems that I indeed fell into common script of "Beauty and the beast" which is really cliche nowdays. Thank you for pointing it out, I'll take that into consideration when creating another fic.
3488994 Truth be told Nurse Redheart gave me the most trouble seeing as there isn't really much to work with when adding her character. As for the whole blindness, I really got lazy with this storyline. I mean "Magic" is the explanation, which shows exactly how I wanted to avoid details
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It's not mediocre, you underestimate yourself. But it is far from perfect, too- aren't we all? Keep working on it. Especially work on capitalization, as it seems to be a problem for you.
3489896 It indeed is, but being somepony who learned english by himself I really fail to see most of my mistakes. That's one part of why I write at all, to improve myself
Thank you for the input, I'll promise to look into it and improve where I fail the most!
Another great story. You are proving to be quite the writer, and I can't wait for more.
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That's the most impressive thing about the story. Personally, my reccomendation is to join one of the myriad groups on the site devoted to getting editors to people in need. Or, find a friend. Either way, best of luck to you.
Another amazing SpiLight......
You sir are amazing....
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3488733 And you deserve them.....t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSi9qni5P0LNZUyHjM7LXJrrAg_mKqopAMDXzzXwdqLFCE1_trBOg
Great story. I enjoyed it a lot.
This is the second fic that has made me shed a tear for the happy couple.
You are a great writer, my congrats on a job well done, even if is a oneshot and you where half asleep
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Why is the title is Art of night 1 ?
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3490559 There will be more!
3491058 Glad you enjoyed it!
3491640 Was going for a bittersweet ending but changed it at the last second to happy one, it just felt right to do this
3491901 As the name points, it was done late in the night! Normal fics I create when I'm well rested and don't use all of my imagination. Art of night, as the name suggests, points at fics that I'm writing when half asleep and they overflow with emotions and descriptions. They are different from my usual fics, that's why the name is different. I started Art of Night 2 yesterday
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Art of Night 2 ? What is it ? Is it ready to read ?
3492624 Not yet but soon
Still, its going to be dark comedy... I plan to make a VERY evil and cruel fic. I don't expect a lot of people liking it but oh well, I can't write sunshine and rainbows all the time 
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TwiSpike or ...?
3492634 Sadly, this time no TwiSpike... but can't say anything more not to spoil the surprise
Yet another amazing SpikexTwilight fic. Had feels all the way. The story made sense and the massage here was clear as well (about her eyes.)
10 out of 10 for romance.
9 out of 10 for grammar
9 out of 10 for overall story
Like and fave your way
anyone notice not one of her friends came to vicet her when she was blind and id love to see raritys reaction.
I Love it, great work,
Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!
3492377 Oh I love it!
Mad feels. Definitely worth some liquid pride.
It would be funny to see Rarity's reaction though
If this is your "non of my best" storys I do need to read the rest
The feels got to me. But no liquid pride (that only happens on special occasions)
Still. A solid 9/10
It's only supposed to be a metaphor, stoopid potion! Man, magic is a dick.
More seriously, this was pretty good. You're right, this idea was too good to simply leave unwritten, and too good for any of those grammatical issues or strange word choices to matter a great deal.
3516541>>3535936 Glad you two liked it, Art of night 3 is currently in workshop and it is a nice and sweet Spilight with some comedy that I think you will enjoy
Aww!
a happy ending!
You said that at one point in the story. Twilight also later says something like this. It should be go, not went. I'm just informing you since English isn't your first language.
so you wrote this when you were supposed to be sleeping.
Sleep is for the weak. you are stong.
You don't need sleep.
great story though
I haven't realised why I haven't commented before, I've read this 4 times. ^^' I seriously love it, Spilight is one of my favourite pairings, I thought you did well and look forward to future works of yours.
4005998 Wow, really glad that this story has dedicated reader!
And my next work is... going to be one small and one BIG. I would spoil the big one but the only thing I can say for now is this:
The big one is going to be about EVERYTHING.
The small one will be Spilight of course
4006991 My reaction. ----->
(There needs to be a Fluttershy squee emote already.)
4007102 Haha true, as well as Discord emotion and other notable characters. I'm working on chapter for my current long story, should be posted today and need to finish next one... so much to write and only two hooves