A dragon in a pony community?
Spike always wished to became a stallion but as he embarked into an adventure he slowly realized he already had what he truly needed.After a wish from a mystic comet Spike life will turn from upside down to inside out. SpikeXTwilight fanfic, please enjoy! Currently being edited
Many thanks to Prince Fullmoon for being my proofreader..
This is great .Will you do with this Spike's harem?
You SERIOUSLY need to get a pre-reader/editor. There are a lot of missing periods, words, huge pools of information and new information being added out of nowhere, broken dialogues and much more.
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I know.......................................................
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New chapter soon ?
Please get someone to preread this for you. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes.
PANIC!!!!!!!!!! PINKIE WANTS TO RAPE SPIKE, PANIC!!!!!!!!!! Or don't And poor Spike....fall in love with Twilight buddy, she's the one for you, believe you me, she's the one for you
We can only hope that armor comes with a chastity plate.
1959298 Sadly no.................
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Well he's fuuu...doomed.
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One thing, why is this fic name "COMET" ?
2 things actually, 1st is that the mystical comet that change Spike into a stallion second is for the next chapters to explain.................
And by the way thank you for the comment!
This is terrible.
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You mean the story..........................
Twilight: what happened spike!
Spike:P-Pinkie t-t-tried to rape me...
Twilight:: oh, okay.
Spike: okay?! Is that it?!
Twilight: Spike, Pinkie raped us all.
(Gasp from Spike.)
Twilight: and it was anally.
(Larger gasp from Spike.)
Twilight looks down.
Twilight: it was horrible.
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Nicely done!
I love it, but the grammar it-its unethical.
I am the new editor/Pre-reader for this author, and I hope after I finish helping him he will be better at his work, thank you for your time, Bronymind
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Oh THANK YOU! THANK YOU!
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Can't wait for the updates..
this is interesting.
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Will there be an update soon ?
More.
shit is getting crazy in here.
also you should do some spell checking cause you made a few mistakes nothing big just a few tiny mistakes
What, Rainbow?
Did Twilight rape Spike, is so obvious?
Did she save the poor stallion for she rape yourself him?
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YYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSS !!!!!!!!!!
NEW CHAPTER !!!
THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!!
"Alpha what must I do?" Celestia asked the skies and she received a small breeze hit her face whispering the voice of her lost deceased love.
So is this Alpha Spike's dad ?
Also will Fluttershy, Applejack and Rarity go gaga over Ponify Spike ?
2691585 You'll find out in the next chapter......
Hmmm....what does this dragoness want with the Crystal Savior This is going to be good and fail on Pinkie'spart
This look familiar Wait, I read this before A mortal dragon facing against the Goddess of the Sun? Because that will go SO WELL for the dragon Fail....this is really kicking up, I love it
2701638 Well In this one Omega manages to defeat the goddesses by her powers.....
Omega's origin will soon be revealed but it will be uncovered soon...
That's by the way!
And just for the facts Alpha is not an mortal but his powers rival that of gods.....
interesting indeed
You're* at the very end scentance
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Will there be a chapter 11 soon ?
2869560 Soon after I finish the next chapter of Dragon Undefeated.....
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EVEN SWEETER !!
This needs another look over, seeing how their are a lot of spelling mistakes and a few misplaced words. Otherwise good story.
Please........................................for the love of all Spiral Beings.............PLEASE GET SOMEONE TO EDIT THIS!!!!!!!
I got your back brother, Gods this needs to be updated, more to the point though it seriously needs to be re written, it's so hard to understand, I really liked it though, always something new to see dead OC's talk to main and background creatures, very impressive, I liked it. NEXT!
Fool.
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I hope this gets update soon or later
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Arkyle means that the "your" at the end of chapter one should be "you're"
You you will continue it?
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Please... For the love of of Celestia, Luna, heck even God himself. GET AN EDITOR!
is an update coming up soon? Just curious.
chapter 1 SAYS its edited but theres no way in hell thats the case
4285422 I beg to differ....
4285720 well its just the way its worded sounds really off to me, especially during the first few paragraphs
Please go on