• Member Since 5th Jan, 2013
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Author of MADness


Hello fellow MLP fans the name's MAD, fellow author and brony, and I'm a great fan of Spike stories, specially SpiLights....

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With his dragon nature and friends to help him in the tournament Spike will face the best fighters which Equestria has too offer. Now it's time for him to face not only his opponent in the cage but also the deepest feelings his friends have for him. Will he win the greatest fight this dragon aims or will he succrub to the most fearsome and bizzare warriors the world of mix creatures have in store for him. Antro characters. Picture owned by *ss2son of deviant. Many thanks for fimfiction Foolin , and Bennet001 for proofreading my story.
And here they are:
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Foolin
Bennet001

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 140 )

that last part was funny im coughing from laughter :rainbowlaugh:

That ending was hilarious. Pinkie Pie being a Pimp and a rapist,
seems logical. Those poor stallions.

Ooh boy. I think you really have an interesting story going on here. But the grammar and spelling mistakes are just too distracting to truly grab my attention.

I suggest finding a proofreader/editor to help you with that. Don't ask me though, I'm too goddamn lazy to do such a thing. But I will give you the best of luck in the future.

Worth a follow, but not an upvote.

As DoctorSerious said you really need an editor as there were a very large amount of errors. However, this story is interesting and I would like to read more. If you need an editor feel free to message me as I have a LOT of free time and I would be happy to help you change this into the wonderful story it could be.

Read this on fanfic the other day and was just going to check in on it and see if this was going to update. But now I can follow it

I think the human tag needs to be removed as they are not fully human, they just got fingers instead of front hooves, that does not one make fully human:rainbowlaugh: Also, welcome back brother:yay:

2676771 I'll get on that! :twilightoops:
Thanks for reminding!

2674659 I know.....
I got that from a nightmare Pinkie Pie raping Chuky from child's play movie :pinkiecrazy:
She scares me the most!:twilightblush:

I think you need an editor...

But otherwise, my brain is going 'that was amazing but the f**k did I just read'

lol this brilliant! :rainbowlaugh:
i'm sure Celestia and Luna will love their new toy, Spike is such a thoughtful son :trollestia:
Pinkie as a rapist? can't say i'm sureprised :pinkiecrazy:
Q: will this be or will there be any TwiSpike? :moustache::heart::twilightsmile:
i look forward to reading more :yay:

Riz

2677195
TwiSpike ?

Please explain this "well let's say at least Princess Celestia and Luna would have a new toy…. :

:pinkiecrazy:"Dont worry, Spike, it is like sex, hurt only first time."

2679612 Molestia :trollestia: and Lunanaughty will love it very much..............

2680302 The SpiLight scene will come next chapter and for the new toy let's just say :twilightblush: the princesses have something to keep them entertained for nights to come until it die because of the rulers endurance... :rainbowwild:
In other words the tentacle monster will became some sort of sex slave thanks to Spike

Riz

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So Celestia is Spike's mom..?

Foster mom to be exact...................:twilightsheepish:

Faceboooooook...:pinkiecrazy:
Lol, Luna is a naught pony.:trixieshiftright:
What Spike is going to make? :moustache::trollestia::facehoof:

2733899 I know right. They probably shattered the toy with the
Royal Canterlot voice- induced moaning.

that ending... :pinkiehappy:
so will Spike finish all his fights by sending them to his mom and aunt? :trollestia:

2734659 You'll find out in the next chapter and thanks by the way!:derpytongue2:

2735247 Alicorns ARE eternal. Unlimited stamina.

Riz

What a strange and awkward thing to talk about your son..

you assholes keep writing amazing stories after i post a comment on a different one saying that lately i havent read a story as good as this one. But here we are, reading 5 fucking amazing stories within the past two hours contradicting all past statements........keep doing it:scootangel:

celestia is a very freaky girl. :trollestia: I hope spike gets a harem. :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::moustache:

Had to skim it, but I have to agree it definitely is in need of editing. There are several writing groups like "Proof-reading, Pre-reading, and Editing Group" around the site that have folks who I'm sure would be too happy to do it for you. Love the concept, though; reminds me a bit of my own... though my dragon is most decidedly not undefeated... for reasons.

2926451 That's cool but Spike would have to learn that winning may not be the best for him or for everypony else....:derpytongue2:

A good story thus far. My only suggestion would be a beta or proof reader, grammar seems to be a problem at some points

"Ps: please send us another monster. Luna broke it."

Pfft…
:rainbowlaugh:

If the next chapter is good (both grammatically and story wise) I might favorite this story.

I laughed HARD when Twi thought he was a whore, Gods did I laugh. A very, very well written chapter, I can't wait for the next, I like the idea of Antro, it makes me want to write a story with such ponies. I'm excited for more:yay: Wonder what Fluttershy and Dash are up to, this should be good.

3220645 Oh believe me Cloudscale will be put to chaos once Spike shown is awesomeness to them! :rainbowwild:

Not sure why, but it sounds like Spike going into some sort of fighting tournament with money as the grand prize, and the premise reminds me of King of Fighters. If there's another KOF/FiM crossover, can Rainbow meet Kyo?

3691113 Sorry but I won't do any cross overs soon....:fluttershysad:

3703507 Don't worry I'll add a new character in the next few chapters and he will shake Spike out of his scales literally...
And oh thank you!

I can take a wild guess as to who you're adding.

Very nice! I missed this story, I thought it would never update. Thanks for proving me wrong!:pinkiehappy:

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