• Published 1st May 2014
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The Life of a Wanted Changeling (Comment Driven Story) - Down with Chrysalis



A you decide story about well a changeling. More info inside.

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SEASON 2 IS OUT!

SEASON TWO IS OUT HIVE MIND! Well the season 1 recap is at least. Anyway go check it out


NOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Comments ( 40 )

#thehypeisreal

You can't tell me what to do!

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I'm still trying to decide whether to read it but, If the people who fave without liking are anything like me, it means that they didn't like the story enough to give it a like but it was still interesting enough that they wanted to be notified of updates.

(In other words, because you must fave to follow here, the equivalent to following without faving on Fanfiction.net becomes faving without liking and the people like me who actually care about sharing recommendations find alternatives to the faves system.)

OK, I don't know how I never read your story before, having read Razor's for the longest time, but I'm glad I finally did. I just chain read every chapter today so that I can take part in the sequel. See you there :pinkiehappy:

Warning: nightshade cuteness overload.

Loved the kingdom hearts 2 reference of axel.

Portal references=win.

Really good job here.

This story is so good I just read 70 chapters.. in one day.

Now I read all of them... in one day.

Awesome story. This has been one of the most enjoyable stories i've had the pleasure to read on this site.:pinkiehappy:

5189612 Probably in Free Birds.

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It is explained, just keep a reading.

Well, here we all are. Every single one of you, all at the gala, and all ready to attack. Now before you do, let me remind you.

how could you?:fluttercry: you wasted a perfect chance for a doctor who reference. that's just like the scene from 'the pandorica opens.'

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That's what I was going for...I guess I messed it up huh?:twilightsheepish:

5840596 not by much if i was 'reminded' of it.

CHALLENGE FREAKING ACCEPTED

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:rainbowdetermined2: Give it your best shot, and no holding back!

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Sure, why not

And please pm me next time you have a question, this is a comment section for the story after all

6410817 Well, that's more interesting than my story:

I was up late at night, watching some vids on youtube, I find a video of bronies, and think to myself;

"The F**ks a brony?"

forty minutes later, I knew all too well.

6617012 I honestly don't know what I was on when I wrote that comment.

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The timeline for this fic is a bit messed up. Somethings have happened before they originally were supposed to. It's all explained in a blog I posted way back, as week as in the Authors Notes of the first chapter...I think

And all because he kept calling Sir Luck a lady...

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It’s pretty good.

Suggestion: Please put the "suggestions" inside "spoiler" bars. Reading the "suggestion" and then reading the actual implementation ruins the action because, well, you posted a spoiler just before it!

https://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=lyrics+wanted+man&&view=detail&mid=8AD86803F867D1DB06448AD86803F867D1DB0644&&FORM=VRDGAR
There's a filk song parody of this "Wanted Fan" but I couldn't find it on YouTube (copyright issues, no doubt)

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I forgot about this story and the spamming of comments I was in the middle of...

How?! Why?! I know not!:flutterrage:

No spoilers, please.

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hello!
how far in the story have you gotten yet?
I'd like to know your reactions!

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can I interest you in reading this story to the end perhaps?
There's more serious stuff later on!

Fine I'll give it a go

this was very stupid and very funny.

Haven't read the story, but while I was growing up my mother was a HUGE Johnny Cash fan so the story title brought this to mind

Ooookayy. That was a mess of something. I couldn't even follow it at the end, with how much "noise" there was. At first there was a script, so to speak, a central theme. Then it started piling up, but it was tolerable. But then it became a MESS. It went this way and that with new abilities, stupid references that were WAY out of line in the universe, Character pileup Mane Six being right MORONS. I swear to god, halfway throught I was thinking they were cotnrolled by something. How else do you miss the saving Offender did?

This story REALLY went out of it's way, just to punish him. Time after time, he solves a problem and gets blaimed anyway...

Back over a year later to reread one of the first major stories I've read on fimfiction. Been so long I've missed this story(And totally not because I need a refresher after abandoning season four for so long and the sheer boredom of no good stories to read.)

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Blame the commenters, they want comedy, they get comedy. Even if it hardly makes a plot.:derpytongue2:

Though, for me, the plot becomes much more enjoyable in seasons 2 and 3, even if the comedy is still there.

Edit: For the author, this story is missing a second-person tag. I'm pretty sure the second-person tag didn't exist in 2014, so I'm pointing it out now.

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Commenters choose action, not the world. you can't blame players for worldbuilding of GM.

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Well, the actions of the character limit the world, can't have an 'evil' bug if the bug decides they want to be good. And thus, the commenters have altered the plot.

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Do I need to look up all the references that make no sense? Or how no matter how many times he saves everyone they are out for BLOOD? This is a whole heap of stupid. No central theme(a Nightmare, Doctor Who, what else?), braindead characters... In Russia there is a saying. "Started for the health, ended in the memory". Rough translation. Started well, ended with disaster.

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