The Life of a Wanted Changeling (Comment Driven Story)

by Down with Chrysalis

[FIXED] Episode 37: IT'S NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE I SWEAR!!!!

"Uh, hi"
*Fluttershy mumbles hi back*
*Akwardness Intensifies*

You decide that (after twenty minutes of just staring at each other) it would be a good idea to start a conversation. So, you take a deep breath and introduce yourself in the smoothest, most impeccable way possible,

"Uh, hi."

Fluttershy just stares at you. You start to sweat under your hood and you start to think that Fluttershy became a mute after the last time you saw her. After awhile, she finally looks at you and says,

"Hi."

Woah... I thought she acted like this because of Smaug, but I guess it's just in her personalty to be extremely shy.You think to yourself as you try to open your mouth to say something, but no words come out.

Come on Bugze, shes just one of the mares you helped save from Smaug. It's not like you did anything to make her mad- oh wait

You notice that Fluttershy is now looking at the CMC with concern. By the looks of it, they've calmed down a little bit, but it looks like they're still shaking. She then looks at you with a glare and you finally realize what it must look like to Fluttershy. A cloaked figure who's face is hidden in darkness standing next too three terrified fillies who were screaming just a few minutes ago.

She probably thinks I'm the one who did it... NOT GOOD!You think to yourself in a panic. You decide to...\

Quickly explain to Flutters that you were not the one terrorizing the CMC.

Quickly explain to Fluttershy that you were not the one terrorizing the CMC, she might attack (not likely) you if you don't. You quickly look at her and begin to talk so fast that it would put Pinkie Pie to shame.

"OkayIknowwhatthislookslikebutIswearitwasn'tme.Itwasthischickzardthing. ItwasgoingtoattackthemandIstoppeditsee!"*(1)

You point at where you stunned the chickzard. Fluttershy turns her head towards where you're pointing, but looks confused.

"There's nothing there." she says in a stern tone as she looks back at you. You gasp in shock before you look over to see that she was telling the truth. The chickzard is gone!

"But...but how! I used a stun spell on it, it shouldn't have been able to move for at least an hour!" You say to yourself in a confused and panicked tone.

"How dare you..."

You 'Eep" at that and you slowly turn around in horror to see...the scariest glare you have ever seen in your life! You swear the glare Fluttershy is giving you is hypnotic! You're so scared by it that you can't even move no matter how hard you try. You just can't. Fluttershy starts to slowly walk towards you, her glare intensifying the closer she gets.

"How dare you scare three sweet innocent little fillies!" She says as she approaches you, "You should be ashamed of yourself! I have half the mind to drag you by the ear all the way to these fillies' families and make you apologize to them! Now what do you have to say for yourself mister!"

She stops talking to you when she right in front of you, Her glare is so intense that you swear she's staring right into your soul! The only words that can come out of your mouth is this...

"But but but but but but but but but but but but etc"

Her glare just intensifies and she is about to say something else, when you hear someling yell,

"LOOK OUT BELOW!"

Fluttershy looks up only to be knocked all the way back to the CMC by a dark blue blur. You shake your head to get rid of the image of Fluttershy's glare.

Note to self: never make Fluttershy angry... EVER! You think to yourself in a serious tone.

You look over to where Fluttershy is, only to get knocked down by the same dark blue blur. You get up and you finally get a good look of what hit you. It appears to be a female pegasus with a... strangely TARDIS blue coat and fire orange mane/tail. Her mane is styled in a short pixie cut and her cutie mark is a music note. A half note to be precise. She shakes her head and opens her eyes and you can now see that they're the color of ice. She looks at you for a few seconds before she says in a sassy tone,

"What are you suppose to be, the Grim Reaper."

*twitch* Your eye twitches in annoyance and you decide now would be a good time to use your intro.

"No. I'm not the Grim Reaper. I'm the one who watches over the innocent! I'm the one who protects those who can't protect themselves. I'm the shadow that follows those who's pa-"

"Yeah yeah yeah whatever. Look I'm in a hurry so I'll just introduce myself. Names Lightning Chaser, the craziest pony you'll ever meet." She says in a prideful tone. She then looks around in a nervous way and then she looks at you and says,

"Look, my gut's telling me that you're a good guy, so promise me that you never saw me. What you see there was a...'accident' that I might have caused that involved alot of cider and some matches down in Manehatten. So you never saw me... right friend?" She asks you with puppy dog eyes.

Curse the rotten no-good pony who invented that look!You think to yourself in anger. You just sigh and shake your head 'yes'. Suddenly she punches you in your front leg and says,

"Thanks bro! see ya around...maybe." And with that, she flies away.

You shake your head and can't help but think on how you get yourself into these kind of situations. You look over to the CMC and Fluttershy and you see that both the CMC and Fluttershy have calmed down. So you decide to walk over and talk to them so that you can prove your innocence that you didn't scare the CMC. Fluttershy notices you and she says in a shy voice,

"Oh..uh sorry about giving you 'The Stare' mister Headless Horse, thankfully the girls here explained what happened."

You sigh in annoyance and you look around for anything that might try to interrupt your intro again. When you don't see anything you give a quick cough and say...

"It's alright you were just trying to protect the little ones. But I'm not the Headless Horse, I'm the one who watches over the innocent! I'm the one who protects those who can't prot-*zap* Owwwwwwwwwww..."

You just got knocked down by some sort of purple magical blast. You look over to see who zapped you and you see... a really angry Twilight Sparkle.

"AGAIN?!" you can't help but yell out of annoyance at how your intro was interrupted (again) as you get back up.

You hear the CMC gasp and Fluttershy say "Oh... my." You also see Twilight smirk and you begin to wonder why. You scratch your head in confusion, only to come across the answer to your own wondering. Your hood was knocked off your head by the blast! There's only one thing you can say about this situation...

....

....

....

"WHY MEEEEEEEE!"

What do you do?

Author's Note:

Hey Hive Mind, DWC here.

(1) heres the translation to what it said "Okay I know what this looks like but I swear it wasn't me. It was this chickzard thing. It was going to attack them and I stopped it see."

The winner of the 'superhero' name is...

The Hooded Offender

Congrats to all those who voted for it as well as to Kersey475 who first suggested it in the first place.

Also the OC, Lightning Chaser, doesn't belong to me. It's forevertheDoctor's OC. I hope I did a good job of writing her OC. Forever please pm if I did a good or terrible job of writing your OC.

Now to forevertheDoctor and MagusBlack you guys should be nearing the "T.V weapons vault" and it's protected by The Silence from 'Doctor Who' So be careful when you get there. But it will be worth it if you want a bunch if T.V show weapons on your side.

And to Kersey475, same thing I told you in the comments "Oh shoot LOOK BEHIND YOU! It's stinking Discord! Okay if you don't move there's a slight chance that he won't see you. f not and he does see you then....RUN LIKE HELL!!!"

Today's episode question is...

What kind of categories should I add to the story?

As in should I add stuff like Adventure and Action and stuff like that to the story's categories. You kniw, add to the Random and Comedy tags I already have on the story. This has been DWC...See ya

Comments

[forevertheDoctor]

You let out an exaggerated sigh.

"Oh, of course, I suppose you're going to attempt to murder me. Again. Well, I can't let that happen. Sorry, girls." you say casually. You mentally smack yourself. WHY HAVE YOU BECOME SO SASSY AND OVER CONFIDENT?!?! However your mouth does not seem to want to remain shut.

"Well, I will be leaving now. Good day, Madame." you say in your exaggerated British accent.

Well GODDANGIT.

Time to do the most logical thing possible.

You desperately scramble up a tree.

[forevertheDoctor]

Really. The Silence. I MEAN REALLY?! Fine. (Defeats the silence with the help of Magus)
That sucked. But OMG SOOOOO MANY WEAPONS. (Picks up sonic laser) oh my god yes. Magus, get a weapon. Let's kill things >:3

[Kersey475]

Fluttershy runs at you and you brace yourself for more pain as Apple Bloom says something like "Fluttershy! Wait-!"... but the Pegasus tearfully tackle-hugs you and says how happy she is that you're okay (you think she re-cracked one of your ribs, but she's so cute and sweet that you don't care). Twilight orders Fluttershy to get away so that she can restrain (and/or possibly beat/blast you to a pulp) you, but Fluttershy and the CMC come to your defense (especially Fluttershy telling Twilight that you're the changeling who saved her from being crushed by a boulder, took on a DRAGON for them, and recently saved the CMC and Applebloom saying how you helped Applejack harvest all those apples). You now have 3 more friends (and MAYBE one uneasy "acquaintance") who don't hate you for being a changeling!

For the sake of continuity and the timetable of the episodes, Twilight, Rarity, and Applejack split up to look for the hooded changeling (aka Bugze) after he teleported away from the library and that's how Twilight ended up frozen by a cockatrice in the forest. Speaking of which, Applejack and/or Rarity attack you.

You realize that since Nightshade is also a blank flank, she can also be friends with the Cutie Mark Crusaders. While nopony is looking, you have your 'daughter' put away her armor so she can blend in more and the filly also decides to hide her wings and/or horn with a spell because an alicorn filly would attract ALOT of attention...
-You know what, let the Hive Mind decide whether Nightshade should disguise herself as a Unicorn, Pegasus, or Earth Pony.
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I LOVE the running gag of Bugze getting painfully interrupted in the middle of his intro (it's like the universe telling him to shut up ), but I imagine his outro should be, "Hooded Offender, AWAAAAY!!!" (and he comes up with the name because he's misremebering the name of a story he liked when he was little, The Masked Defender)

I recommend adding Adventure, Alternate Universe, (and possibly Crossover if you plan to have other non-mlp characters show up) tags

Wait, Discord is the Spirit of Chaos right?
*Throws copy of Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen*
Discord: Oooooo, mindless chaotic mayhem soaked in the tears and curses of fans! *Goes off after DVD*
Okay, he's distracted, what do I do?

[Thetntm]

APPLE BLOOM!
SAVE BUGZEE!

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...AGAIN!

[butterfield pancake]

Project a spell that reveals yer mind (and it's full of cake and other tasties)

[Fireheart 1945]

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^ This, or just teleport away again. It (usually) works.

[Down with Chrysalis]

4566474 Run away from Discord, there should be a portal that leads to another version of Equestria nearby, so jump into that. But be careful, my sensors are picking high spikes of power near you. My guess is that Luna and Celestia have been freed. So watch out for them.

[Kersey475]

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Ok, I made sure to be REALLY stealthy and undetected by any creatures this time (note to self: lightsabers NOT stealthy) and as a precaution, I dropped a defunct copy of Superman 64 and E.T. Atari (which a gamer like Luna will avoid like fat people avoid salad, thus causing Celestia (who will be following Luna and be in turn followed by the Mane 6 and Discord) to stay away as well)
I'm jumping through the portal, NOW!

[Erised the ink-moth]

Scream "Will you PLEASE just let me use my superhero into?!"

Twilight raises an eyebrow and Bugzy clears his throat.
"Okay... I am the one who watches over the innocent; who protects those who can't protect themselves. I am... the Hooded- *Twilight zaps him* OW!...fender."
Bugzy passes out as Fluttershy and the CMC rush to defend him.

As for tags, definitely Action and Adventure. Possibly Tragedy if things don't start turning up for our unfortunate little changeling.

[Thetntm]

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Please god no. You know what?

We're too op and Im gonna do something about it.

Before anypony has time to do anything, twilight remembers that you were the pony of shadows and knew how to teleport, So she quickly wipes your mind of all spells that she knows how to perform.

You lose:

Teleport.

Stun spell.

[Fireheart 1945]

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Okay, fine.

Create a shield long enough to escape; if trapped, ready yourself for battle. Just don't get captured.

[darkiethechangeling]

YOURE TIRED OF RUNNING TIME TO FACE THEM AND TELL THEM YOURE NOT EVIL!

[mirror ruby]

time to activate plan t or known has exit stage left or also known has TELEPORT AWAY!

[rainbow20percent]

fluttershy should stand up to twilight and tell her what good bugze has done or at least he should stand up for his self