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Razalon The Lizardman


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This story is a sequel to HUMAN: The Crystalvision Series


Princess Twilight and her friends get sucked into another Enchanted Comic, one which takes them to the world of bipedal, overdressed monkey-like creatures, otherwise known as humans. Now the little ponies must navigate their way through the comic book world and its many varied obstacles so as to accomplish the goal set to complete the story and return home.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 49 )

Something tells me these aren't actually Twilight's imagined humans, and are in fact real, full blown humans from our dimension or one so close that differences would be near impossible to detect. I hope I'm right, as it's what I've been looking forward to since the inception of this series.

It's nice, but I don't want to see Twilight blocking bullets or shit.

can't wait for the ponies to see what humans are capable of...

no wait, they are kind of our creators....

Ah, the Seattle Public Library. A fantastic place to find a map. Well done. :pinkiesmile:

“Now things can’t get any worse.”

are they gonna get to meet any other inter dimensional travelers? like Brian or Stewie:pinkiesmile::twilightsmile::raritywink::scootangel:

Fluttershy reeeeaaaalllly needs to calm down. The comic his harmless! And I didn't even hit that silly-willy firebug very hard.

I think they might have underestimate human technology...

They think their immune to damage, I hope they get seriously injured, that would give them little taste of reality.

She stopped plastic explosives....you have earned a dislike.

4473365 No, maybe she should've thrown the explosives away instead of you making her overpowered.

4473608 How is having her protect a few humans from one explosion making her OP? If anything, it's just following what she's shown to be capable of doing in the show. Be thankful I'm not having her go all super kaiju on anyone or something to that effect.

4473965 Go look up C4. Try to tell me she's not overpowered after seeing the explosive force it gives out.

4475402 Okay then, I'll make sure she lets the humans die from now on. :derpytongue2:

4475801 She could of thrown the explosives somewhere AWAY from the criminals.....

4476083 Yes, and had she known the cops were moving in a horizontal line through the forest she would have, but she didn't know that. :derpytongue2:

4476116 Alright. I guess I can't convince you otherwise.

4342628 I read the comments and dude: you did your best, that's what counts, raz.

Bad ass. I imagine the enchanted comics teleport one to another alternate universe, as well as other parallels, not to some fictional place, those things are still quite the mindboggler, nonetheless. I would love to have one of those in the human world, so damn boring here, the arcane would spice things up. :D

if i was there i be like All payday 2 style

that was awesome! jayden like this

So nothing can stop twilight from taking what she wants? that seems unfair.

6278409 Well, she did create humans. But don't think everything that's happening isn't going to come to a head by the end.

So are they Humans in this? because I keep seeing Hoof, even it implies they are humans

6279430 They're still ponies in this. The reason for which will be revealed later on.

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Humans dont freak- oh....

Illusion spell?

6279703
Maybe next time I will read the previous chapters after a new update that comes out after like a long time

Throughout the whole walk to the bank, I thought to myself.

It's not gonna work. It's not gonna work.

Then the robbery happens.
Chances of working..... 25%

you really messed up with those links buddy

On the HUMAN'S side, things continued to mess with the gang. Though, for Pinkie, that was a lucky break. On the Equestia's side, they finally arrived and getting closer to their goal. Knowing Fluttershy, that little surprise of her might actually be less severe than the two thinks.

C&C:
”Attention passengers! Please remain calm and seated! Put your oxygen masks on completely over your mouth and nose!
> Missing the end quotation.

And so a million silent screams could be heard upon the realization that this fic was incomplete. Cursing to the skies "why lizardman" but no anwser could be heard, only the eternal suffering of those who dared to read this far in. Rip.

I was wondering when and how this was going to happen.

The butterscotch pegasus stopped. She turned to face them with a maniacal look that sent shivers down both of their spines, one they’d never before pictured adorning the former Bearer of Kindness’ face.

Oh god don't let this turn into a Butchershy fic.

It's k man, writting shouln't be forced, as long as you're enjoying yourself everything's fine! Spend your time how ya like, this chapter was really good btw, Looking forward for more.

On the HUMAN’S side, the girls finally got through their midair crisis, and onward to their next destination. On the Equestia’s side, it seems they are not the only one who is on their next destination as Fluttershy and associates has finally arrived in Canterlot. Things are going to get very interesting when they reached where they are going...

C&Cs will be PM.

“Tell us who commissioned it,” she said.
The sinister tone with which she spoke managed to unnerve Geo a little, but he still managed to keep calm and shake off her hoof. “And what if I don’t?” he asked, annoyed.
The pegasus said nothing in response. Instead, she unzipped her bag and reached inside, pulling out a black and yellow can with a white lid. Geo’s ears perked up when a very faint sound began emanating from the can.
Buzzing.
He gulped.

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See Pinkie, THIS is why you pay attention to the story tags and description...

7154007 "Instead, she unzipped her bag and reached inside, pulling out a black and yellow can with a white lid. Geo’s ears perked up when a very faint sound began emanating from the can.

Buzzing.

He gulped."

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So Fluttershy buys her weapons from Taylor Hebert now?

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the picture was of them and their friends as humans.

Fucking Weebs

Meh, what else is there? Ooh, ‘Pinkie Pie R34’, that sounds co–

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“Oooh, ‘Cupcakes’ sounds fun to read.”

Once again:
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