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This story is a sequel to The Day My Life Began

My life is over.

It has been for a long time, when I think about it. In some ways, I expected this. Ever since I first got this power, I've been waiting to die. To be captured and tested on. To be taken from my family and have them treat me like I'm some kind of freak.

I was starting to get better. Less depressed about it. I was finally starting to be happy and let people in. Or, ponies in.

The Mane 6. Friends of mine. Pinkie Pie, the pony who told me she would be my friend. Fluttershy, the pony too scared to talk to me when we met. Rarity, the pony who was the most surprising friend. Rainbow Dash, the pony who took the second longest to trust me. Applejack, she was the pony who taught me the value of honesty. Twilight Sparkle, our relationship as friends as always been strained ever since she first knocked on my door. Caroline Bellingham, my best friend and the person who brought me out from the darkness.

Now they all hate me. They can't stand to look at me once they found out. I can Jump into the Fictional World. Movies, Books, Shows, you name it. I've been doing this for so long.

My daughter, she got dragged into this. It might just get her killed. It got my sister killed.

I'm fifteen. No social life, no real friends (anymore), no family, no one to call on. I'm just waiting at this point. Waiting for him to come back and kill me.

Waiting for my life to end.

(Be warned. Chapter 49 contains slight gore (at least by my standards of writings). The rest is still good)


The prequel. is up. Read if you want.

First Published
27th Jan 2013
Last Modified
16th Oct 2013
Comment posted by iwueriiusdf deleted at 6:17am on the 29th of January, 2013
#2 · 98w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Having the ability to jump into anything ya want? ..... Dang, that'd be a cool super power! It'll be good to see where this goes!

#3 · 97w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

one of these days, i'm going to have to read the prequel to this....

This is gonna end well. Not

>>2040128 write your own self-insert story, enter it, ???, PROFIT! :rainbowdetermined2:

#6 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

finding out your cutie mark would be awesome.

#7 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

the characters are realistically written and the interaction in our world is believable.

I like this story.

#8 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

This story.

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I can dig it.

#9 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 4 ·

Beauty. Absolute beauty. There are a few spelling errors here and there but the plot is engaging and never leaves me wanting to skip over something.

TEACH ME YOUR WAYS

#10 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

I was sort of confused when Spike was speaking. I got the message but the way he spoke kinda lost me a bit.

Still loving the story. Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

Oh, and on the concept of jumpers, do you mind if I make my own fanfiction with a character like that and feature you as a cameo?

#11 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Sure. Thanks for commenting by the way

Spike used guilt.

It's super effective!

Honestly, this story needs more views.

And I also know the pain of writing lines for AppleJack. The difficulty doubles when writing for Rarity.

Spike used guilt.

It's super effective!

Honestly, this story needs more views.

And I also know the pain of writing lines for AppleJack. The difficulty doubles when writing for Rarity.

#14 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

I can feel the preconceived resentment. Bravo.

#15 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

SMURF JUST GOT REAL

I thought Morgan could only teleport once every week?:rainbowhuh:

Still a great story. Luvin it!

Suspense huh?

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I can dig it.

Suspense huh?

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I can dig it.

#18 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 10 ·

Cool story pegasister, you should tell it at parties. I'm sure pinkie pie would love that. :pinkiehappy:

Looking forward to the next chapter.

You rock! Keep on writing.

#19 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 10 ·

Cool story pegasister, you should tell it at parties. I'm sure pinkie pie would love that. :pinkiehappy:

Looking forward to the next chapter.

You rock! Keep on writing.

#20 · 95w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 8 ·

It changes. This time she got super stressed and went into defensive mode, which caused her to recite the spell that sends her to whatever universe she last jumped to

#21 · 94w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 10 ·

>>2158240 You know you posted the same comment twice right? :rainbowhuh:

#22 · 94w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 10 ·

yeah. my internet connection is slow from my datapad. I pressed the add comment button twice since it was taking about an hour to post the comment.

#23 · 94w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

skibbity doo bop shalingy doo wah!:pinkiehappy:

#24 · 94w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

>>2180767 WTF, what does that even mean brony?

#25 · 94w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

>>2192933

i apologize for that, i was high as fuck when i put that there

#26 · 94w, 12h ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

>>2193393 I would believe that

#28 · 94w, 11h ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

>>2197104 Apology accepted. :rainbowlaugh: Just next time try not to comment when you get high, k?

#29 · 94w, 10h ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

>>2197115

i make no promises

#30 · 94w, 9h ago · · · Chapter 11 ·

An end chapter plot twist and cliff hanger that I can't be mad at?

Well done Authora.

Well flubbing done.

>>2202501 It was just too good to pass up

This really needs more views :pinkiehappy:

#35 · 93w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

The descriptions of the characters were exhausting to read, and I admit to having skimmed through most of them. Heres my recomendation:

"Hey there author! How's it going?" Taquito McBurrito said as he walked over to the author, brown boots making light thuding noises as he moved across the wooden floor.

Author turned around from the TV and saw his good friend Taquito for the very first time after, oh so many years, being in Vietnam. She could barely control her joy as she stood up in a hurry and slapped a hand against his shoulder, laughing in joy.

Taquito chuckled as he looked at his friend, same ol Author, he thought. Wearing her same ol trenchcoat and gasmask with an iron open faced helm over her face. Author did not miss a single aspect of Taquito either.

She ran her eyes over him quickly, taking in all the strange sights about her friend.

He no longer wore his old leather jacket nor his broad sombrero and jeans. Taquito was now all clad in chain armor with the only exception being his boots, which were leather. The man had changed a lot on his face as well, the pale blue eyes no longer carrying the same shine as they did before the war, his hair no longer long and wild as his personality. Taquito now wore his scalp uncovered and shaved.

Author patted her friend's shoulder once more, her smile losing a little enthusiasm as his appearance brought back the memories of the war.

"It's been too long, friend."

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See what I did there? I described Taquito McBurrito as the action progressed, making it fast paced and descriptive without boring the reader. Try to keep the action flowing and the reader interested, and no matter what you write, you'll have the drones-err, readers reading! :twilightsmile:

>>Authora97 well played well played

#37 · 92w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 13 ·

New chapter. I can dig it.

#38 · 92w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 13 ·

>>2242061 Thanks Hazard Facts

#39 · 92w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 14 ·

And the plot-er story thickens:rainbowlaugh: can't wait for the next update

#40 · 92w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 14 ·

I wont read it. I wont read it. I need to do my chem homework.

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Meh. It'll still be there in about 5 minutes.

Also,

HAH! I'm  16 months older than you! :rainbowkiss: so! awesome!

#41 · 92w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 14 ·

Oh. Almost forgot.

I can dig it.

#42 · 92w, 2d ago · 1 · · Chapter 14 ·

That's not my actual birthday. You know that right?

Leo's are born in late July to mid August. Virgo's are born late August to mid Septrmber.

If you'd checked my homepage you'd know I'm a Leo thru and thru

im i sucker for classics so cop walks out of the bathroom witch happens to be right next to the door the the cells just as there walking out.:pinkiehappy:

#44 · 92w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 16 ·

Well shit.

Can't wait to see what happens next! Good job :pinkiehappy:

Must...not ...READ

Aw carp...

OH! A guard comes back to get something he forgot, sees your team, and then alerts the other guard nearby that you were trying to sneak around.

BOOM

Two cops on your flank = a plan hitting the fan

#47 · 91w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 16 ·

Threaten whoever tries to mess with you that you'll trap them in I Am Legend!  :rainbowwild:

#48 · 91w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 16 ·

Story sustaining cliff hangers?

I can dig it.

YAY keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

#50 · 88w, 5d ago · 3 · · Chapter 10 ·

NO MOM STAY OUT OF EQUESTRIA!!! :trollestia:

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