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Oooh! New read! And ouch, rough spot for the lot. The ghouls though, ouch. It had many good moments.
Kindness, eh. I am of mixed results on right now. I see what you aimed at I think.. But the whole encounter felt, off. I'm not sure what it was exactly that was, but it did to me. As soon as I can get more a reason why it did.
Why would any of the elements remotely trust the spark? I think is the part of it. That sorta rubbed me the wrong way. If they wanted something, they would cut and run from that one first. Magic broke away from them, so I just can't see any good reasons, or even bad reasons to as it were, shack back on that train.
Sorry if it seems a little rough in this, but i guess im speaking without revising, but what i get from my gut.
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There is a very specific reasoning behind what happened with Spark and the Elements that led to this. I assure you, this will be answered. Nothing happens without setup, without planning. The reveal of the Elements is something I'd been planning for some time, once we moved into the Everfree arc (which comprises the last 6 chapters of the story overall).
As far as Cruelty is concerned, she intended to give us a taste of what fighting one of these beings is actually like, and to show off her strengths. If you figure out what felt off about it, feel free to PM me and let me know. I'd be curious.
The story is almost done but it will never leave your head it is so good
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Heh. Indeed it is.
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I love speculation. Speculation's my favorite!
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It is intentionally vague. General timing is something that I aim to clean up during the final edit pass to make timing references a little clearer.
As far as star and super alicorn are concerned, again intentionally vague. Up to the reader to decide if it's a memory or just a very vivid dream.
Still thanks for continued reading!
Just got back into this. AND IT'S COMPLETE! Too bad I forget a little bit of what is going on. If you don't mind, what was the latest status of Twilight Sparkle?
I like this rendition of Ponyville years after the Light Bringer's shenanigans.