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I got to thinking, you need a stallion with a short cut mane that wears sunglasses all the time and has the tendency to shit down the necks of massive opponents he kills, after ripping their head's off. He should be called Duke Nukem. Just sayin'.
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But after the first time they met him, they would have to wait around for him to show up again... FOREVER!
(Get it... Cause Duke Nukem: Forever took like forever to come out... it's funny)
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/facehooves.
Well played Clacky. Well played.
good chapter again and really interesting, also smooz I see what you did there G1
Ok, that whole Luna/Nightmare thing was really confusing. It seemed really OCC of Shining, and very rushed. Not to mention its not matching up to my Project Horizons knowledge.
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Well, I don't consider PH canon. So that's why it probably doesn't.
However, there's all sorts of very good reasons why Shining did what he did. Of course, to find out you'll just need to keep reading.
Poor Lust, she just wants to have fun, but everypony else just keeps putting her down! And Danish...this really isn't the time to be springing another quest on Star!
so the smooze had a statue of Lucky...so does that mean Lucky was the one that left the message?
once again, I have to be honest, I'm not sure I like where you're going with this. Not only the elements, but now Luna and SA were also corrupted? Something I liked about FOE was how it was all about the ponies. Despite what the zebras thought, the war was entirely the fault of ponies and zebras, not some malevolent presence from the stars. And now it turns out that it really was some malevolent entity that caused the entire thing? eehhhh.... It's going to take more than that to stop me from enjoying this story though. Will continue watching.
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talking about what is and isn't canon...in regards to a fanfic. Only with ponies.
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Hey, thanks for your comments!
I haven't revealed every piece just yet, and there's still a bit in there to go on. As we move forward towards the inevitable confrontation with Spark, more and more of these pieces will be revealed. The Shining Armor orb in this chapter was a difficult orb to write, simply because it doesn't reveal everything. You only see a snippet of something, and the brain naturally takes it into the direction it wants to.
So I totally appreciate your concern. I'm always fervently trying to watch where I step in with canon, and this is one of those chapters where things are revealed that it gets a little muddy and unclear as to what is what. I realize that. Rest assured, I do have all of the background pre-war bits all worked out as to how Spark came to be, what Twilight actually did, and how Shining Armor and Princess Luna figure into that.
As far as 'canon' is concerned, the comment is in reference to the fact that no FoE sidefics are considered canon to the original story as per Kkat. Even this story isn't canon. However, a lot of folk will take PH as canon simply due to its popularity.
I've said this before that I don't consider PH to be canon to this universe. I've also said before that this is in no way intended as a slight against Somber or anything like that. I like Somber quite a bit. He's a great guy and very pleasant to speak with. And PH is a great story. But as he himself has even said, even PH is not canon to the original universe. As such, it's also an unfinished story and thus his canon can and does change with each new chapter he writes. As a story that takes place in a post-Day of Sunshine and Rainbows time period, it would not make sense to write this with PH in mind as well as the original because anything pre-war would change based on what the next chapter does.
Now, onto your other comments!
Glad you loved Lust and Danish. Danish is so much fun to write, and every time he's been in a chapter I feel like I'm really stretching those comedic muscles coming up with his one-liners and his Celestia plot jokes. Lust is also a joy to write, and her fight sequence was one of the more interesting ones to write.
As far as the smooze deal at the end, what do you think? Was it Lucky? Or was it something else? Was Lucky really ever there, or was she some fractured part of Star's mind post-death that left once Spark did? I really never came out and said what Lucky was, and even now with this chapter it is fairly ambiguous. So, theorycraft and whatnot on that for a bit, I'd be curious to know what you think on that.
Long comment is ultra long, but I felt that due to your dedication to keep reading, I felt obligated to respond to such a well crafted and intelligent comment. So, thank you!
- V
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well, while I'm not about to go back and search for it through a 100k someodd words, I'm pretty sure I recall Lucky at least once conveying info on the state of affairs of Star's surroundings that Star would have no way of knowing herself. So unless Star is latently psychic/precognizant (I have no idea how to spell that) and just doesn't know it yet, Ima have to go with Lucky being an actual entity separate from Star. Sure, such a thing would be quite unusual, but Lucky, apparently being some sort of natural born alicorn, is(was?) also very unusual.
And besides, that explanation fits better with her being a counter balance against Spark, who is infact a separate entity.
So, the Zebras were actually right in this universe? Holy crap... =O
That twist with Luna... But you already explained yourself so who am I to complain?
Also that:
No idea how much is missing.
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Well said, I love the analysis there.
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Right? Or wrong? Once again, that orb only gave us a snippet. There's still plenty to be revealed.
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Ah! Thank you for catching that! I looked at my other mirrors too just to be sure, and I have no idea how that got missed in the copy. But, it has been fixed!
Wow ... just wow.
Nice job there.
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Thanks!!!
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No problem, would have made a longer comment but I'd just end up looking like a broken record.
There, finally read it.
And wtf lucky. You are bad and should feel bad.
"Rabbit Season! Duck Season! HUNTING SEASON"
Another fantastic chapter. This is still one of my favorite stories.
Good chapter. Never stop writing, you're way to good at it Can't wait for the next chapter.
thanks for welcoming me to the team. hopefully it doesn't take too long for me to learn how to catch flow mixups and other things.
Just spent the last six hours reading this from the very beginning, and I need MOAR
Have a like, a favorite, and a mustache
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Thanks! No worries,Chapter 18 is in progress. Lot of work still to do but its ongoing!
Enjoying this fic a lot ^.^
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Thanks! Glad you like it!
I love love love this fanfic
I know i'm close to th' latest update, but i gotta say this now. A, th' Gardens or whatever project from Fo:E woulda gotten rid of radiation and th' wasteland period, and B, that museum is basicially th' Dunwich Building, isn't it?
Something doesn't add up about shineings orb.
Hey, you're Kharn now!
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Nice reference of Soldier Field and the Chicago Bears in the previous chapter.