that was amazing good work

And now all the Steel Rangers die.
Great chapter mate. I really liked the battle with the Traid. Just a mares night out.

~Reggie.

“If it's a trap, I say we trip it,”

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Also good one on how you inserted Twilights new Alicorn form into the story . Good chapter again

No Ministry Mare... I want you to die

Inset James Bond joke here. Personally, I would have: You ruin my plans for far too long Miss Ministry Mare.
But that's only my opinion.

Well, interesting cliffhanger. While I'm saddened that the Ministry Mare has left Chicacolt, you've given us a rich world ripe for the plundering. Keep it up mate, you're almost there!

Power armor or not,those bastards are going down Anyways I've started reading your story after so many plugs and second hand recommendations and they weren't wrong,I like how you managed to integrate season 3's finale into the story too. And the Sins' resolution is satisfying in a way but a part of me still thinks that they'll play another role in future chapters but of course with stories like this,I might see some more plot twists but I'll reserve my guesses to see if they come into fruition or not

There are not enough profanities to describe those stuck-up bigots.

Just two errors this time volrath.

ripped them out of their frame, and I set them aside. locked.

I'm not sure if locked is supposed to be capitalized, or that the period after aside should be a comma. Either one fixes it.

, you’re mine!” My love shouted.

I think part of a sentence is missing there, as there's nobody being referenced beforehand. This is the beginning of the paragraph.

Other than that? Good update.

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Good catch. Thanks!

I bet he’s got huge guts!

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I am glad someone recommended me to this story.

Also are the 7 Sins any reference to Fullmetal Alchemist?

A rather enjoyable arc. I have to say I am really enjoying not only the story, but the characters. I have to say I do think you did and excellent job of blending the results of season three into the story.