This story is a sequel to A New Equestria
The New Equestria colonies, ruled by a Republic-like government set in place by Princess Twilight Sparkle and Princess Lunamaria Eclipse. Many of the ponies here would pledge their allegiance to these two, had a need arise. Well, in the dark past hidden from them by Celestia, and others, a need does arise.
What happens when the secrets hidden by the past unravel, in the worst way?
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Chapters (25)
All I can say is
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All I can say is that the first three or so chapters deal with Luna and Celestia's relationship. Then, well a lovely surprise before the plot goes back to the problem that surfaced with Green Hunter.
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Mind=Blown
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I'm glad you liked it.
3715165 I did.
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Well, I'm off to take over the world in Civ 5, then maybe I'll post another chapter.
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Doth I see FlashLight before me eyes?
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As I said, they are cute together.
This was awesome, and I'm liking it already.
And Celestia being the head of The Knights Templar? What in the wide world of Equestria?!
I look forward to finding out more as to why Celestia has been doing this, as well as the next chapter!
~ Super-Brony12
Long live the Lunar Republic!
~ Super-Brony12
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What about Luna? It's her fault.
Oh and out of complete and utter boredom, I'm making a slight prequel fic set before Celestia founded the Knights Templar. (Hilarity will ensue. Well, my depraved perverted version of humor. Yay innuendoes!)
I understand the fluffy reference.
I feel like I'm the only one who doesn't like her that much.
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I don't like her either. Though I also don't hate her, I put that in there because it fit.
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Yeah, I know. I was just being silly.
~ Super-Brony12
Lot of single column dialogue, but beyond that, not complaints. Well done.
If you could figure out how to break that up, perhaps with occasional changes in scene of lengthening banter, you could make it work much better. I hope.
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Nice I know there is a lot of one line dialog moments, it's deliberate. Deliberate in that I chose not to marshmallow some scenes. Not much happens either way in this chapter, that's why it's longer.
Nice to see you here finally by the way.
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I don't know what took me so long. Glad to be back.
Ooooo, this looks like it's going to be good!
Good chapter, and I look forward to the next one.
~ Super-Brony12
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It may be awhile before you see the next chapter....I'm planning on it being the longest chapter so far,and going by how I've been doing recently, it maybe up to a month before I finish it...
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Eh, it's alright. I can wait.
~ Super-Brony12
Very interesting. A glimpse of the past and a previous caretaker of chaos, huh?
I understand that this started a couple chapters back, so sorry if I don't make much sense. I'm still trying to wake up the last few remnants of sleep still in me.
Intriguing chapter and I look forward to the next one.
~ Super-Brony12
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Actually, this glimpse to the past is chapter 9, 10, and 11 only.
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Oh. So we'll see one more peek into the past over Rourke huh? Alright then, I'm interested to see what else over Rourke will be let known to us.
~ Super-Brony12
Hmmm....very peculiar.
~ Super-Brony12
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Indeed. Peculiar indeed.
(Which part?)
The last scene. The one that has the dialogue between Discord and Twilight in Twilight's room. The whole 'hearing things from the future' thing. I wonder what could have caused Twilight to hear Rainbow Dash's voice from the future, assuming that was indeed her from the future.
~ Super-Brony12
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I'm not saying a word.
Except maybe referencing "Poneology Artifact #34-5867-95 file b" from chapter 8.
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*gasp*!
Oh no! Trollestia strikes again! Quick everyone(pony), put up the Anti-Trollestia barriers!
~ Super-Brony12
Interesting poem.
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I'm sad to say things are only going to get darker.
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Wha?
Is she...is she referring to Deacon?
I also think it's pretty cool how not only the Crystal Empire is more than likely backing The Luna Republic, but several large Changeling Hives as well. Like Celestia said, that is no easy feat.
Another really good chapter and I look forward to the next one!
~ Super-Brony12
Hmm...sketchy. Nothing wrong with you Rainbow Dash, you say? I beg to differ.
~ Super-Brony12
Short, sweet, and a bit of foreshadowing. I like it.
~ Super-Brony12
....um. I'm a bit lost here. Who's "The Teacher?"
~ Super-Brony12
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He's been mentioned several times throughout the entire story, Book One and Book Two. Rainbow Dash has met him, in a cave. Twilight Sparkle has seen him mentioned in books.
Are you American, cause in America I believe you live in college, while here in England you don't.
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Yes, I live in America. And no I don't live in my college. What your thinking of is College dorms, which I don't live in either.
On a different note... What? I don't get a hurrah for the return of ANE? I was thinking that that would be the first comment after more then half a year of nothing.
5642123 Oh sorry.
HURRAH!!!! IT'S UPDATED!!!!
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It was a joke... To be honest, I didn't expect anyone to comment until after I posted another chapter or two.
5646055 Oh.
Soon.......
Damn. This was almost hard to swallow. Knowing that some of the most powerful entities, are more than likely, going to their deaths. It saddens me greatly. At the same time though, it makes me more intrigued for the next chapter!
~ Super-Brony12
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I only have this to say: It's a lot bigger then you think. As Deacon said, I play the long game.
That's many years later.
It's easy, you touch/taste/smell, one side of the coin, and do the same with the other side.
Then compare.
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The quote is commenting on the 'Many-Worlds' theory. No matter what we do, we will only ever see our world. Our side of the coin if you will.
6378888 What's wrong with our world.
...Oh yeah right. No matter, I remember what.