Years have passed since Twilight first became an Alicorn. In this time she has grown into a powerful asset to both Celestia and Luna. In this time, Celestia mentioned her teacher, named Makavar, with whom would be arriving in Equestria, to continue Twilight's training. Though this starts the second part of her life, she has a long way to go before she can be accepted in the eyes of Makavar. For little does she know, that with Makavar's arrival, an adventure starting way back before Equestria's founding is brought to her. All along with the evils that should have been defeated at those times.
(Please read my newer fiction, A New Equestria)
Chapters (9)
Trying too hard. "Whom" is a pronoun used to replace objects, which are easily identified by their coming after the verb.
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"Whom" is also an older version of the word 'who.' I'm not an idiot nor was I 'trying to hard' as you put it.
Personally, I'm not really interested in the description, as I put it together at the last second. Try reading my story first before you make comments about my grammar.
Ok, this story is looking like a wall of text here. Try to shorten your paragraphs up a little bit, and remember to use the tab key to indent every time you start a new paragraph. Also, it seems that you have a problem that a lot of new writers have. You NEED to make a different paragraph every time a new person talks. It's crucial.
Oh and by the way, Sagacity is right. You did use "whom" improperly.
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You've been misinformed. "Who" and "whom" were both derived from the Old English "hwā", not one from the other.
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I'll look to see if I can improve my distribution between the paragraphs. Though it'll be after I complete chapter 1, so that I can do both. It is a problem I've had in the past.
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I'll change it this one time, but try to not be insulting next time. I will ignore you if you are.
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I'm not the one who called you an idiot.
I just help people with their plot and grammar, man.
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I wouldn't mind help with the plot...
Yes, a short 'chapter' but it' a backstory chapter... that, and I couldn't think of any more for this entry.