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Rainbow Dash finally has become of age to train Pokémon, so she, Twilight Sparkle and Applejack all set out into the Equestria Region. All with different motives, but all longing to discover, battle, train and befriend new Pokémon! Making new friends, but also new rivals, Can Dash overcome the eight fierce Gym leaders of the region and become champion?
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Somehow, I can tell that the Pokemon fit the girls.
Since Pokemon GO is out ... well now comes a crossover with MLP around the corner.
I'm very interessted where this story goes!
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Not too bad.
You should have Rainbow make it to the Elite Four, have them be 4 of the Wonderbolts, and since this is a crossover with Pokemon (this is just an idea) have the champion be Ash Ketchum all grown up. I always wanted to see Dash vs Ash.
this story will be 100% cooler then anything anyone else will write keep up the awesome work
this story is getting great cant wait for chapter three
A Tailow with Brave Bird is really powerful.
Something tells me that Shining Armor and Cadence are going to be gym leaders of the Steel and Fairy types...
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Nah I see them in the elite four. I see the Elite Four being Blue Blood: dragons, Shining Armor: Steel, Cadance: Fairy, Luna: Dark with Celestia has the champion.
7401424 At least I got their typing right. Will Celestia be bound to one type or be like Blue? I'd also like to know if Sunset and Starlight will also be included.
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I would see Celestia more like Cynthia. Sunset and Starlight I see being admins for the evil team, with Sunset reforming first.
AWESOME
I would like to see Twilight gain a rival in Trixie. The issue is what could they become rivals over?
I think they could battle Ember farther down the road and she would use Dragon types. For much sooner, I think they could find fluttershy soon but as a breeder in training
OMG it's here.
Wait, where's Spike!? Is he a trainer or a Pokemon?
7414722 Trixie shall in no doubt be appearing in the coming chapters, what role she will be playing in the grand scheme of things, however, is one I'm still pondering on...
7414732 Fluttershy will definitely appear in it with quite a considerably big role very soon. Ember however is one I haven't thought of yet, but the more I think about it I definitely would love her in the story at some point. Suppose we'll have to see what unravels in the future!
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How about Sunset Shimmer and Starlight Glimmer? I did suggest them for admins for the evil team earlier.
7414857 Spikes role in the story I've not yet determined, I'd love to have him in as a Trainer or a passerby that get's involved in something, though. As a Pokemon, however, I'm gonna stick with the Pocket Monsters that pre-exist rather than developing original-ish ones.
7414876 To be honest that idea does sound like it could be really good, I do want to implement the Evil Team into the plot very soon
7414877 Makes sense. I mean, if Pinkie's a gym leader and Fluttershy will be coming in a future chapter, what about Rarity?
7414907 Yeah she will appear, but I only plan for her to appear a while down the line, of course I may make her appear beforehand but I suppose it's whatever I feel fits best for the overall story
7414945 That's okay. Pinkie being a gym leader makes me think she's hiding her strength and intelligence behind her general randomness.
have prince blue blood be a gym leader for the 8th gym, plus have Rarity join the group and she wants to become a contest champion
I think you should have a dragon type gym somewhere in there and have like spike or shining armour as the gym leader
i mean if you want to just suggesting
Well I like this story, but my main problem with it Applejack and Twilight has no reason to be leaving Poneville. I know that Rainbow wants to beat all eight gyms and eiite four.
But you haven't gaven a reason for Twilight and Applejack as of yet. At first I thought Twi was going to be like Red before gym battles who just wanted to catch all 149 (not counting Mew or Mewtwo) Pokemon so Oak dream was came true.
I don't know what AJ would do, maybe wanted to get out to find Polemon to help with the farm back home. Just my little ideas.
7415332 To be honest you have a point, I think that in the forthcoming chapters I'll actually bring it up. I know what every one of the main characters motivations are, I just haven't ever really brought it up, probably because so much goes on in the story it never really slows down to truly give time to develop the characters
7415741 Well it good to break away from the action to focus on characters and training. The Diamond and Pearl anime and the X and Y one does it really well. So you should look into those for ideas.
It would be good if you maybe add in a little bit of romance along the way, make some special boys appear in the girl's lives, you know?
I hope that the girls start catching more Pokemon. I have tree quick suggestions for Pokemon for the girls. I think a Dratini should be a good fit for Rainbow Dash. Applejack should get an Aggron. While Twilight gets a Tyranitar. A near legendary would be sweet for all three girls. It would be sweet to see the girls try and raise such powerful Pokemon.
I think the Spinerak should come back and follow AJ kind of like Aipom and Ash, and later on it saves her life and she catches i think another good pokemon for her would be Rhyhorn. Due to it being able to tackle the trees to knock the apples down. Also Rainbow Dash should catch a Scyther and riolu both are very fast and strong pokemon. Twilight i think should get an eevee and evolve it into Espeon, along with a pichu but she gets one as an egg.
Hope to read more soon
Nice to see Twilight using the Pokédex more, it felt really odd having just Rainbow use it.
Also I can totally see Rainbow Dash not know what a Pokemon Center is. Nice touch.
This is a nice little story that I hope will receive a rebirth some time.