It's been two years since representatives of the United Human Federation arrived in Equestria, begging for help in a crisis situation. Months later, the Human-Equestrian Alliance was formed. But now, relations between the two species are strained, as mistrust begins to boil. It comes to a head when all UHF forces leave Equestria during a massive invasion, leaving the ponies to fight for themselves. Have the Humans abandoned their allies? Or do they have something bigger up their sleeves? The clock is ticking, as the ponies are on the verge of complete surrender, and humanity might just be Equestria's last hope.
(A/N: I know this is a beaten to death idea, but I'm putting my own spin on it, as well as some "Ace Combat" Elements.)
Chapters (5)
Good story and great discription on the battle scenes keep up the good work
Wow, it's only been a couple hours and people already want more!
Well, I must give what my public demands!
Betrayed. Forgotten. Abandoned.
In Vorkuta, we are all brothers.
...I just had to say that.
Ace Combat 4 Crossover. Awesome! Will definitely follow.
Ive seen that sorce pic somewhere oh yea it's from a game u can dowload on iPad called metal storm something lol random comment
A ribbon insignia on a tail of a fighter jet AC4 Mobieus one? Blaze from AC5? Update NOW!
To all you AC4 vets, feel free to make Mobius 1 "You"
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Holy shit! As a Blaze fanboy, excuse me while I ejaculate for second...(grunts)
...okay I'm done! 
Those emoticons I used for my grunt...
And now I must read this! It better be well-written or I'm gonna be pissed!
Silver out!
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Thanks for pointing that out, I hadn't thought about that.
The UHF is definitely not just American, they are a batch of every nationality, I just haven't gotten around to how to pointout the accents without breaking the 4th wall any more than I have
As to the tech, I am guilty for using only those of the US,and I'll be sure to include more European weapons from now on
Fox One- Semi-active radar missile
Fox Two- Heatseeker
Fox Three- Active radar missile
That is the only critique I have for you.
Decent story.
Silver out!
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Euro, Russian, Asian and American tech all mish-moshed together would work just fine.
Anyways, this story is great and the military accuracy is surprisingly good.
You're doing good work here.
Silver out!
Ok, so here's my deal.
This was one of the first stories I ever read here. I read it back when there was only one chapter (which was bucking brilliant by the way), but I didn't have an account, and couldn't favorite it. When I did make an account, I came looking for it, but couldn't find it. Now, here I am, five months later, and this pops up in a group I was browsing.
and give it an insta-fave and an upvote.
Naturally, My first reaction was to say "Thank you sweet baby Jesus"
Then I see there are two more chapters than when I last saw it and I said, "MUST READ"
Then I read it, and was put into an awesome coma. You have got some great stuff here. I would offer to help you out with any military matters, being something of an Ace Combat player and military-minded person myself, but you seem to have it all under wraps, which is why I enjoy this story so much.
Keep up the kick-ass work.
Love this story, more please
MOAR PLLLLEEEAAAASSSSEEEE
If you want this to be a true Ace Combat 6 crossover, you had better include the Aigaion, Gyges, and Kottos aerial squad! I will dislike this if it does not.
Ace Combat is a good game, but I find that hard to crossover with MLP.
The Great Eternal Artist,
Akasuna no Sasori
Oh please tell me Boris will make an appearance!
In any case that was a nice story, though I'm curious what the Gryphons will use against the humans. Considering the presence of multiple known aces this may become a very short or very dangerous war.
Don't get me wrong, I love this story, but it's something of a wall of text. Perhaps indent your paragraphs, or leave a space between them?
it would make reading it much easier on the eyes.
Other than that, you don't disappoint! If I could give it another upvote I would!
I loved the Ace Combat games, and I like the way this is going, and by the way Garuda was mentioned I can only hope Strigon team will make an appearance. :D
Keep up the good work on this story.
Oooh, it's been a while!
Also pegasi is the correct plural for pegasus, not pegusi. Just thought you'd know.
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DAMN I KEEP FORGETTING THAT!
Thank you
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Write it down on a post-it and stick it to your screen.
The story lives!
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THAT HAS TO BE THE SORRIEST EXCUSE FOR A DRILL INSTRUCTOR I HAVE EVER SEEN! WHY IS THAT PRIVATE SMOERS?
But in all seriousness that was actually quite adequate
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It makes sense though that they would be sending those of different ranks to be drill sargeants. With half their homeland conquered and forces scattered, they would have to use whatever is left around.
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SIR! I AM NOT ENLISTED! I AM IN AIR FORCE OFFICER TRAINING AND THEREFORE NEVER FACED THE WRATH OF A DRILL SERGEANT SIR!
Also, Thank you!
Though I was unsure how to react when I saw Gunny Hartman commented on my fic... O_o
its short its sweet and it keeps to the pace, shoooooot i cant wait till the next chapter =D
A tunnel, if there is no flyin through a tunnel at some point, then no favs from here
1306907 Uhhhhh...........
"Talisman replied, fury in her eyes. "
Her?
...............Sure! Why not?
"Fox two!"
I just love saying that over the radio to my wingmates when I'm in the simulator. :)
Warlock for da win.
He he. Napalm-equals-fun!
crossover of ac4, 5, & 6
Hope this continues soon, this is great!
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Link doesn’t work.
continue it