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GhostRaz6


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Year: 2558
Four years after the Halo event...

The UNSC Yamato on her maiden voyage sets out to a distress sent out by a colony only to arrive to a glassed planet and a fleeing Covenant force. Following the Covenant fleet, the small UNSC force finds themselves in an alternate dimension over a primitive planet. Can the UNSC stop the Covenant before they glass this world or will it join all the others burned up in this crazy war. The one thing that throws a wrench in the mix... Ponies.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 25 )

decent. Faved and upboated

Interesting, but too short to make up my mind.

Faved for now, keeping an eye on it.

This is very well written. The beginning sounded just like it was out of one of Eric Nylund's books. I am definitely following this.

Good start you have going on here. Just keep working at it!

Waiting for the rest, definitely got my interest.

WHY ISN'T THERE MOAR THERE NEEDS TO BE MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like it. Good job. You just need to make the chapters a bit longer. Not grammatical mistakes that I caught.

not to shabby mate i give it a 8/10

How big is the Yamato km wise?

2131988 If I did my homework right, it should be about 2/3 the size of the UNSC Infinity.

I'm liking the story so far, and you're really pacing it well.

A quiet Female Spartan with active camouflage and is named Alison? I see what you did there... at least I think. :rainbowderp:

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In other words, about 4 km long (Infinity is like 6 km. if I read stuff right).

2179490 Basically. I still need to draw up final specs and put them in a google docs for everyone

aw i was hoping for a space battleship yamato crossover :( still good but

2205597 space battleship yamato/ my profile pic: single sexiest ship in any sci-fi ever go watch the anime its from you will not be disappointed and i'm thinking i might do a SBY/mlp cross when i find the time to write one

2205934 I'll have to check it out now. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

Halo 3 wake me when you need me. To tired right now to look for the rest.

The portion with the two banshees looked very similar to the Fall of Reach chase seen in the book. Is that the reference you were speaking of?

3007139 Well that was actually an unintentional reference on my part. There might still be a few more in there.

WE DEMAND FOR MORE CHAPTERS

Just a little update for everyone. I'm going to try and get back in the swing of things and start writing again. It's been a long time and I will try and lengthen the chapters to the best of my ability.
-Sorry for the absence,
Ghost

Will you be including some new characters and species from the newer TV seasons and the 2017 My Little Pony: The Movie?

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I most likely won't due to the fact that I just recently was able to get back on this site. I've been busy with life and have just recently gotten things settled to the point where I can start writing again. Other than that though, expect an update to this story soon. It has been a long time coming but I should be finished with it in the next few days.

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