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Dash wing jobs and angry sex = GOOD!
luna falling in love for no real reason = bad
regardless i am enjoying this. Continue writing for my amusement peasant! *Hoity chuckle*
realflying
Not sure if error...
or in the visual of something the particularly like;
while viewing something they particularly like;
Gosh Darnit Rainbow Dash
I think you accidentallyd a capital here
I saw a flash of blue, then rainbows blue past the branches I was in.
Blew? Personally, I think it would sound better as "a rainbow colored tail flashed by the branches
next to me"
The next thing I knew,
Sounds better as "when I opened my eyes again"
feel free to disregard part, or all of this comment, most of it is just my opinion anyway.
very funny now celestia will be very wary about dom and lune while dash will be very active towards dom
One thing to say to him.
Dude, take it like a MAN!
3963512 I disagree.
Considering the severe social ineptitude that has been touched in the show, the concept of her falling for her first kiss is completely expected. Much like a girls first High School relationship.
This can only get worse... and by worse I mean goodness, gracious this will be funny to see.
Luna is smitten, Celestia is protective/jealous, Rainbow is excited..... in more ways than one.
Poor guy just wants to get a day to himself so he can think but is denied by the overactive ponies. I.E. Twilight wants to consume his brain, Luna wants his love, Rainbow wants his...uh...yeah......
Great to see ya back and thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next one!
~8chill
ok dude you have two options now
option 1: you put the sex tag and help rainbow relax
option 2:you give her a sub-zero cold shower
I greatly enjoyed this chapter. Though I have to wonder how Luna so quickly became smitten. After being alive for a long time you would think that such impulsive behavior would be minimal, to non-existent. (glad it isn't though this is just too funny)
3965325 I will admit... it was a spur of the moment thing when I wrote it, so I didn't think too much about it...
No virginity, we don't want you to leave us now...or do we?
3963512 heh, I agree with both statements, but just to let you know, the thing that was going through my mind when I wrote that; what the fluck do I write for his dreams? I wanted to include action, mystery, horror (though that didn't really happen), happiness, and romance. when I reached the romantical part... well, I couldn't stop myself from writing a kiss scene, and well... then I got carried away and made it where Luna's first kiss seemed amazing enough that she began to feel infatuated, well, in a sense that she wanted what she never had before.
-There are many personal theories on this matter, and I did my best to do what I felt right.
-Luna and Celestia's age aren't easy to confirm, and I estimate it to be Luna= 2k years old, with Celestia= 4k years old. I'm not sure how accurate that is, as I know nowhere in confirmed databases that Celestia is that old, so I narrowed it down to Luna being around 1.5k years old with Celestia being 2.5k.
Also, adding this little love triangle gives me a chance at making comedy...
3963638 I actualy have an event thought out that revolves around this for chapter 9 or 10...
3964052 I would love to be in his situation! My 3 top favorite ponies, and all in 1 mixture of awkwardness and joyful humor! lol... but then again, in reality... I would hate it. too much life confusion...
This can only get so much better... xD
3965164 or option 3: you get to see what I have planned... xD
---Im still trying to figure that part out, but I will state now, it does not include sex... but will hint towards something similar... ;]
3965325 I agree, on a critical standpoint it would never happen like that with her personality. on a non-critical standpoint, refer to my reply to Jazzaman.
3971015 We do, but we shant grant such a joyful occasion (plus, I don't write true clop on this profile )
3972894 thank god for that (me no likely clop)
It's raepin tiem
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3971015
Statement change. Now that we are in chapters 20 and above... Making me reconsider.
The more I read, the more I realize how stupid what I wrote is! The sheer amount of luaghs I'm getting though, that itself makes up for the simple fact at how... Absurd it is I wrote this all!
The content is at times cringe worthy, and yet... I'm crying as I luagh at some of these parts!