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Pegasi for plural, pegasus for singular. A few other grammatical errors, but you're improving as the chapters progress. Keep it up!
4) Look shocked and suggest he eats fish instead like the bear. Then explain how things work in equestria for predatory species as she works with omnivorous and carnivorous species all the time.
stare a very quiet and disturbing stare just at the mere mention of wanting to eat a chicken, strong enough for dom to want to apologize for everything he has done on his life
... Dandelion isn't bland. It is horribly, horribly not bland.
don't ask.
I think she should joel his foal for being a foaly mole joel.
4273044 I don't usually reply with my kindle, but I got 2 hours b4 I get on my laptop...
I've eaten a few scorpions... THOSE are horribly bland...
4274169 Er... Care to elaborate what you mean, cause I've come at that comment through multiple angles, and I have no idea what you were implying...
4272197 So I would use "Pair of Pegasi" instead of "Pair of Pegasus"?
4277245 Yes.
4277245 fine, I'll speak like a normal person, be pissed at him for killing his "pet" and not explaining to her that he needs meat...happy?
Good chapter.
As for fluttershy? Don't think she would have any reaction at all, she deals with all sorts of animals with different dietary habits. Eating a dead one shouldn't be an issue as he isn't outright killing and said animal can still provide benefit for another.
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