Is there any chance that Flare will have his jet back?

cute. Im really liking this story, its got some great quality. A few little cliches here and there but nothing that makes me roll my eyes. I'll admit i was sceptical about this fic at first, but you've pleasantly surprised me

Your story has inspired me to steal the jet from fort zancodo in gta 5, BRING IT ON

3827591 I've done that multiple times, I even had a race with a group of people to see who could steal a jet the fastest, bonus points were awarded for undamaged jets. I won after I jumped a car over the fence and stole one that was mid take-off.

3827164 Last we saw it, it was hurling down in flames. If he gets it back, they'll have to put the parts here, over there, in that corner...

3827164 I agree with Scarheart, I tried to describe the jet as totaled, entirely destroyed. he not only dumped his jet fuel (Firstly, Equestria, I doubt has anything like it) onto Victors. then he applied airbrake while flying at a vertical angle. not only does his jet lose speed, but planes cant, and don't fly straight up. victors jet crashed into it, and im not sure if you know this or not, but air vehicles are extremely fragile, so this kind of crash, plane body to plane body, would decimate it. this means not only is the wrecked planes on fire, but you need to realize, a jet fuel fire is extremely hot. there was a national disaster a decade or so ago in the U.S. that can back that theory up.

Equestrians may have some feats of wonders, but I doubt engineering a jet is something to there understanding. I love military tech... lol

3827189 I'm glad that is so then, as I feared I was moving the timeline too fast, so this chapter was revised near the end so that that didn't happen. and seeing as you didn't mention the behavior from Dominic and Dash, I can assume that it isn't too drastic of character for either of them, but if it is too much, please let me know.

3828498 the only thing that makes me raise a brow is how strongly Dash feels about him scaring her or her friends. That strikes me as a little odd, i mean didn't dominic explain it was a prank? Dash is a prankster she should have been able to see the humour in it after a while, certainly not something to start crying over. But other than that there haven't been an OOC moments, just dumb ones.

3829237 lol, I tried to get it to where she wanted to ensure that Dom wouldn't pull another prank like that on them. reasoning being because of how strongly she reacted. also... think how AJ would respond to a 'threat' xD
---She knocks apples out of trees just by kicking the trunk for a living.... lol

Looking through this comment section shows that one unhappy diddly darn fellow disliked every comment, to equal things out I shall like every comment and like every chapter! Huzzah!

"It's just a prank, bro"

Multiple times in this chapter you use message instead of massage. They are rather different things.