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Wolfsalvo


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*Sigh* Another fighter pilot in equestria with Rainbow Dash fic!

I'll give it a go, but you better have something original hidden up your sleeve.

Flare is such a badass name.

Almost self-insert level badass.

3539998 there's a lot of rainbow dash/ fighter pilot fics here!?

I have only found one other story out of all the ones I read, and I found more stories with rainbow dating a human that was transported to equestria they were on foot...

how do these typical stories go, so I know not to do what they do...

3540031 lol, I can only get that badass when im playing battlefield 4, other than that, I wish I was doing a self insert, that way I would be able to safely say I was like flare! xD

Sadly, im only that badass in games...

3540031 One, This is very true. Very very true. And two, are you going to update your A-10 in Equestria fic anytime soon? :fluttercry:

Author, you have my favorite for this fanfic, I look forward to fun times and crazy hijinks ahead.

3544130 Dammit!

... I was hoping I would be able to do something new... now I see that I will probably only make a few of the same stories as others...

So... tell me, please... how can I avoid making a few of the same decisions as those authors did for their stories? Like, im sure they all have something in common (other than it being Rainbow Dash/Human romance)?

3544237 having way to much technology porn about the jet. No one really cares all that much about what the caliber of the guns are or how much fuel it eats per second. Also, jet fighters are not cars, in most of these fics they park the jet at any old place then just use it like a commuter train whenever they feel like it.

Also, after a few chapters the plane becomes very unloved, pushed to the side. Keep the plane as an integral part of the fic, i'm sure if an alien landed their spaceship on earth all our scientists would be gushing over it.

And lastly. Make the relationship believable. Please?

3544295 Well, it seems the majority of the problem wont be present... I tried to paint the image of what Flare did, but if that didn't get through to you (not trying to be rude about that, just the wording), then here it is;

He dumped his fuel from his jet, and Victor was trailing directly behind him, and when Flare applied the air breaks, it basically became a lump of metal with no thrust. Hence the explosion; the two jets crashed. That means both jets are trashed, destroyed, no more... the only thing to escape was his seat, which didn't deploy a parachute as he wasn't in it to activate it, and then there was the point that he passed out before he could tell why he didn't slam into the ground.

Romance... it is a delicate thing to write about... and while it will be tough, I will do my best to make it believable. I try not to write things where the two characters look at each other, love each other, and start making out. Flare is a human, RD is a pony, there is obvouis differences that I will need to clarify as the story goes on, and I only intend to make it where Flare has to impress RD (unintentionally of course) to earn her respect, then admiration, then move it towards a slight infatuation, progress it to deep infuataion, and then maybe where they actually start to get closer together. I might not have a set plan, but that never stopped me before. my only problem with Celestial Gift, is it seems that it will end sooner than I had anticipated... THAT one the romance moved way to quick, even for my taste...

pretty sure boy is just an insult, never a nickname

3544597 depends on the company around you. can be a nickname that is meant as a constant insult.

3544465 Wha... No but... F-22 :raritycry:

Still, I like this and you should most certainly continue!
(also I have a feeling somewhere in the story you said the F-35 was older than the F-22, and on a more nitpicky point, that said F-35 needed an upgrade to be on par with the F-22, my OCD for correct tech specs will not let me miss those :twilightsheepish:)

3545314 oops... meant F16 was older and needed the upgrades to be on par with F22...

Will fix it when I get on my computer

I'lll give this a go. Dunno why, but I will

3545314 AAANd... Fixed! Thanks for pointing that out. that was a small mistake, with a big difference for the reading material.

haven't the guards heard the noise? I mean, they should be able to hear things in an almost empty room right?:eeyup:

Liked it! Liked it! The only Fiction I read that's about U.S Pilots.
I bet that Rainbow would ask heaps and heaps of question. :pinkiehappy:

aww... i like stories with jets in them.

Why would a US Air force Pilot believe that he is actually seeing a real mythological being rather than hallucinating, especially since they are trained to not give up information even when drugged?

3569277 you know... I hadn't thought about that...

CIA

Look mate, I don't know about you but that cannot be his real name. One it's impractical and unlikely they would name their kid that. Unless it's a codename for him as a security measure other than that, that is my only complaint.

3570564 lol, I intend for the 'Wild' part of his name to be real, but while I mistook the giving away secrets part for the story, I still know about code-names or callsigns. so I at least know that much to make his name be his call-sign, and his last name be his real last name... I have seen some pretty messed up names be given to kids.....

but if anything, name suggestions. feel free to give me name suggestions. the first names are always easy, but matching them to a last name... not so easy...

3570040
Woah, are you ok? I think I can smell smoke... and is that gears grinding? What is happening in your head over there? Was that the sound of a blown gasket just now? :rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:






:rainbowkiss:Pfffhhhtttttt :rainbowlaugh:hahahahahahaaha!!! Sorry, couldn't resist.

3570852 lol, it is the sound of trinkets falling and rusty gears trying to turn once more...

3570867
Here's some oil... It might help.... Oh, and bang this wrench against it a few times... It works for Engineer, so it should work for you, right?

CIA

3570850
Ok just pointing out. The wild part I understand but no self respecting parent would name their son flare, no matter how drunk you are.

3571741 lol, once again, feel free to give me name suggestions. edits aren't that hard when you know the exact area to look in. and with a name, I know the areas to fix. but I only want believable names that fit the last name as well

Screw studying. This was a much better way to wait for my Japanese exam.

3578311 lol.. same here. Better to write than study for geology finals! Though I will do both... xD

For those wondering why this hasn't received an update yet, I promised my beta for another story that I would cease writing MLP until I finish this last chapter...

I know, it sucks, but this story is 94k words long, and it has been over 2 months since I updated...

3648633 This upcoming Monday.

Yestarday was 3 finals (college level stuff).
Today was jury duty...
Been busy for past 2 weeks as well...

It had been so warm before, unlike the hospitable in Ponyville, I was easily able to fall asleep in these beds, and now mine was all wet... thanks to those guards.

Do you mean "hospital"?

Flare - Meaning of Flare

What does Flare mean?
Meaning of the name Flare

[ 1 syll. fla-re, fl-are ] The baby girl name Flare is pronounced as FLEHR †. The origin of Flare is the English language. Flare is a variant of the name Flair.

Flare is an unusual baby girl name. It is listed outside of the top 1000.

Good chapter now I await an update.

okay i didn't like most of this chapter.

firstly, why was the nurse at the start petrified when she left the room? As far as you told us nothing actually happened to warrant that kind of reaction. If she was THAT scared of him that being in the same room makes her pass out in terror then why would she even accept to deliver food in the first place!

Secondly. Holy balls was that really stupid. Not only has that whole 'i eat ponies' been done to death, resurrected, flogged to death again and then had jumper cables used on it so that it could be used more, but he took it way to far.

Oh i'm an alien that has guards stationed outside and everything is terrified of me? Well lets just make the ones who barely trust me think im going to brutally murder them! Oh and while im at it, i'll vividly describe how im going to brutally murder my only friend in this world to the point where she's in tears! That'll be a right laugh!

With intelligence like that, it seems this guy BOUGHT his way into the air force.

tl;dr You dun goofed in this chapter, stay out of cliches

Inb4 Rainbow is just joking as well.

Congratulations. Your protagonist has an IQ akin to that of a mountain goat.

3790507 heh... I can figure out spelling for other words easy enough, but that word has troubled me ever since I learned how to spell it. lol, let me fix that.


3790545 I'm pretty sure I made it where his name is Dominic Wild instead of Flare Wild. Did I by chance put that in this chapter that his name was still flare?


3790623 heh, Airforce is brain smarts, not actual social skills. secondly, I didn't know that so many used the 'humans eat ponies' as often as your saying. I like to read HiE fics, hell, most my favorite list has humans in it, and not even half of them include that; though I have seen them before. Secondly, this works in real life as well, as I have tested it, and seen it occur with others. The nurse was fine when he was asleep/unconscious, but when he was awake, standing up, and seemed imposing, then she was terrified. Do this with an abused/wild animal. if you appear asleep, it will be fine with observing you, but when it KNOWS your awake, then it will be more cautious. add this all to something that is intelligent, well, then you get this. lastly, and this applies to everything above as well; this is a fanfiction, and if I am to continue to type for MLP, I wont treat it like all my other stories.


3791448 lol, I was hoping that mood shift wasn't too large. I tried to edit what my co-author sent me. if I used what he sent me, well... lets say Dash wouldn't have been herself.

3791991 Happens to the best of us.

3791991

Yes. It's also in the description.

Having a pilot's last name be "Wild" is still pretty awful, but significantly better than "Flare"...

3792278 And now it's fixed. thanks for telling me about that.

I never said co author seriously, but thanks for the nod anyway, like we're you took it

You're using quite a few words incorrectly for this chapter, but otherwise, bring me MOAR!

Is there any chance that Flare will have his jet back?

cute. Im really liking this story, its got some great quality. A few little cliches here and there but nothing that makes me roll my eyes. I'll admit i was sceptical about this fic at first, but you've pleasantly surprised me

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