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no complaints for this chapter. Good job! I wish it was longer but I can't really talk as im guilty of short chapters too.
It is nice to see Pinky acting seriously. She is so rarely cast that way.
Hmm... Could be antagonist, could be background character... Nah, this is fiction. Of course its the antagonist, and will show up at least once more spouting how his honor has been defiled. Despite having no real grievance with the protagonist, other than walking up and asking "hey, wanna fuck?"
Who knows, perhaps I am wrong...
4165883 Heh... I'm doing my best to keep my chapters around if not above 4k words per chapter...
4165909 I think it is because once Pinkie gets serouis... well, this usually happens as a result.
4165937 Who, the confused stallion, or perhaps Pinkie Pie...? You kinda confused me there...
4166167 oh, should a probably been a bit more clear, I meant the stallion. I have seen your foreshadowing, and raised you a prediction.
I though that stallion was bi going after dash then Dom
Can Dom get the g9 eclipse from jc2 some time in
I think you got a continuity error in this chapter, you had it like Dom and Spike haven't met before at all but he ran into him in Twilight's bathroom in an earlier chapter, they didn't introduce each other but the way you wrote this chapter made it seem like they hadn't met at all until now.
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Yeah... That bugged the hell outta me as well when I just read it. I'm making a note to myself to come back and fix that, because even though I wrote the story, that annoyed me. And the mistake wasn't once, rather multiple times...
I don't know why I am just now seeing your comment, 3 years later, but I will be editing this chapter...
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If you want to know my plan concerning him, message me and I will let you know. I haven't forgotten about that antagonist.