There are many things that ponies want to do in their lifetime. They want to get their cutie mark, have friends, fall in love and start a family, and share many wonderful memories before they grow old and die. Ditzy Doo was one of those ponies. Was. Several thousands of years ago, those joys were taken away from her.
Big thanks to, CartsBeforeHorses, for pre-reading and editing this story! If you don't know about him already, check him out. He rite good story!
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I have to admit, this is a really good story! The only problem I find is it being short, but all things are remedied with a little time!
A few errors here and there, but otherwise a good read.
Congrats! I am glad to see I'm not the only one that experiments with these short "punch-in-the-gut" stories...
In fact, to me, it almost reads like a prequel to this...
Very interesting. I have to agree with 3327505 that it does read like a prequel. Or, more like a prologue. You should expand on this.
Very good.
love derpy and I never thought her as making fun of those who are different and I speak from being learning disabled the parents that though the fit over her are saying that's its not right to be different an that's just being a narrow minded and shallow( note please that im new do being a fan I have only just gotten into it less then one month ago so im a bit behind on the fate of this background character) but like this story and hope there is more some day
Ah! That reference to derpy gets pranked ;-;
3870509 YOU GOT IT!!!
The mental image shal never leave!
Poor Derpy...
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