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Darkswirl


Sometimes I like to pretend that I'm good at writing.

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Something sinister lies inside the Everfree Forest; something that even Nightmare Moon herself was terrified of while she walked the same earth.

And now, that entity is calling out, calling out to those with wishes seemingly too large to fulfill.

But none of them ever return.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 123 )

AND HERE IS AL OF MY (FIRST!)((SHUT UP!)) YES
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1387879 I'm glad you like it, but it's been nearly a full day and my story hasn't gotten past "Waiting for approval". :/

1387879 You do know that "First" comments is a bannable offense now, right? There was a blog entry about that a while back. You might want to consider removing that...

Whispers: Gimme 20 Bits or I'll Rape You.

1393465 :pinkiecrazy: Would you mind repeating that?

He' has cometh....

1393495
Look, he has a lot of tentacles and a lot of ponies.
It's Obvious That He'll Do Something That Involves Both Of Those elements...

aaaaww slendys got a marefriend :yay::yay::yay:

1396837 Who else for a stallion who lives for ages than Pinkie Pie? :rainbowkiss:

Very nice. :pinkiehappy:

Why didn't she just fly away? :derpyderp1:

Anything but the hat. :applecry:

1398585 Who? I made it clear what would happen if they tried to fly.

Ah, I was talking about the first chapter. I didn't read it properly. :derpytongue2:

You killed Deerpy you basterd you stupid evil person ill kill ya ill kill ya!!!:flutterrage: The only thing worse then killing Derpy is killing Rainbow Dash! But o well I guess its just a fanfiction. :fluttercry:

1406939 None of them died. ._. Did you even read the last chapter?

Duk

You capture all the ponies' personalities very well :D

I have to read this with background noise or I get creeped out...:twilightoops::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

Nice job!

Duk

*punches slendermane*

:rainbowhuh: DA FAQ?!

Duk

:ajsleepy: R.I.P fluttershy D: :fluttercry:

Or is it...:trixieshiftright:

Duk

:pinkiecrazy: Im COminG FoR YOu SlEnDy :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Duk

"later" is supposed to spelled "latter" I believe

Duk

Pinkie: heheheheheh! Be My FRieND SlenDY!! HEEHHEEEEHHEEE:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
Slendermane: NOOOOOOOOO!!!! *runs*
Pinkie: :pinkiesad2:

That bit in the ending with the crayons... I think I saw that in a picture...

I see what you did thar.:pinkiehappy:

Good story... but I skipped the Fluttershy chapter. I don't like it when bad stuff happens to best pony. At least she's okay now!:yay:

1471154 It was too good of a picture to pass up; just wish I could've found it to crop out the last panel and stick it in the story.

1471173 I still liked the reference. Great job.:yay::pinkiehappy:

1393465Slendermane dose not rape you, he eats you.

Slender Mane,Slender Mane,
All the foals try to run.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
To him it's part of the fun.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
Dressed in darkest suit and tie.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
You most certainly will die.
Slender Man, Slender Mane,
His branching legs are for collecting.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
His face is empty of expressing.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
He won't let you say goodbye.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
You most certainly will die.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
Sometimes hums a lowly drone.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
He will wander 'round your home.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
Blends in well within the trees.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
In the fog he's hard to see.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
Dressed in darkest suit and tie.
Slender Mane, Slender Mane,
You most certainly will die.

1497970 Look, I get you like the story. But this is starting to get annoying.

I just lost my interest

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I like to think he absorbs them into his conscious and then tortures them for all eternity.

1500351He doesn't need a mouth to eat. He uses less..."conventual" methods.

1513990 I love you forever and ever. I'll add this to the last chapter with a mention to your name when I get home.

Slendy is my Squishy #17 now. What do I do with my Squishy #17...?

oh my gosh i love how you changed the point of view and showed a little insight on slendy.

I LOVE YOU.

Not literally, I just love all of your stories. :rainbowkiss:

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