An anonymous pony is found dangling by a noose in his suburban home, located on the outskirts of Ponyville. No pony knows who this stallion was, but all that remains of this fogotten man is an unopened letter, and a heavy rope.
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4450617
You write creepypasta? hmm, you just gave me idea
I could see this continuing in a Juon: The Grudge-esque type way where that house becomes cursed and all those who enter it are doomed to die.
~The lizardman loves that series
This is interesting, but it needs proof reading.
DA FEELZ!!!
Absolutely brilliant, as usual. Well done mate !
Wow, just wow, dude the feelz, I need to listen to my happy music now, but great story still man
4450617 ....what kind of nutshell...
Nice,i like it.But you seem weird.
to be honest, the general freakout about that episode is kinda uncalled for..... no matter what happens: its a cartoon. and im a fan of dark humor so the hanging innuendo got me for a second until he pulls up and he was actually hanging a bird cage. smart gag for a topic that must be talked about instead of kept silenced like the SJW politically correct fuckers that want to shelter literally everyone. i hate being sheltered.
anyways, the story was good.... but there was no reason for walking into the house so i can't shake the feeling Derpy will get in some trouble for it.
5215255 I see where you're come from, it's just I never expected such a 'lesson', despite it's importance, being taught through Spongbob.
And the thing about Derpy... I love writing her. Because her attitude and behavior is so bazaar and unique, you can get of get her to do anything within your story and it would still classify as a 'Derpy Move'. But I guess that's just my opinion.
And thanks for the follow, been a while since I got one of those :)
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And that left quite the impact, I imagine? Because thats mostly my point.... with something as innocent as Spongebob (ignoring the iron butt workout video and Patrick shoving a flag between his ass-cheeks in the movie) bringing awareness with some smart comedy to a mental state to kids and adults alike.... Depression is a miserable state of mind that more people should know about so they can at least show some legitimate sympathy, be more understanding instead of being an asshole that says "man up you fuckin' diva", know what to do to actually help, or stay the fuck away if that said person hates psychiatrists with a burning passion (me).
To your second point: I love writing her too! She's a pretty relatable character to me (although i hate how many people write her as dumber than a sack of rotting fish.... you can be smart and still be mentally retarded.... retarded does NOT mean stupid.) (i prefer to write her as a smart klutz though.... never motivated enough to edit my shit so you likely will never see anything from me).
Last: you're welcome! You deserve the follow!
(btw, i threw all of your other stories on my read later list so you can expect more overly excited reviews from me in the coming months).
5233607 I'd totally love to hear your opinions on them. Oh, and FYI, some of these stories were written a little while back, meaning my writing skills were not nearly up to par as they are now. But judging by the like to dislike ration... I'd say people have enjoyed them anyways. You also really opened my eyes on the manner, thanks for that!
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Yeah, I understand that some stories are kinds old..... I'm not normally an asshole with criticism so don't worry about me being overly harsh about stories that could be years old.
Glad I opened your eyes to it all.
Wait, that SpongeBob episode was banned? I remember watching it, on the channel it came from. Wierd
There is a youtube reading for this story: Here.
Hotel; trivago.
(I'm so sorry. Good story, tho.)