To every resident of Ponyville, the Everfree forest is considered the most dangerous place in the area. It is filled with a plethora of wicked, flesh-hungry beasts that lurk in the shadows of the trees. The bravest of ponies are also considered the most sane and even they do not enter without a plan. Apple Bloom, a resident of Ponyville, decided that she'd help her sister and pay Zecora a quick visit. However, she didn't intend on staying until the sun went down.
A collab with, electreXcessive. A big thanks to him for coming up with the idea and letting me help him expand it! He's a good writer. Please, check him out and give him the attention he deserves!
Written for the 31shotober challenge!
Chapters (1)
Liked, faved and marked to read later (also slightly sad/mad) because the central theme of this story is actually a major part of part of a fiction I'm currently working on
... Also I really enjoy the premise. I expect great things out of this. 
Ah shit... I bucked up. Mistook you for one of the others who's OC I'm using... Sorry...
If your interested I'll leave A GIANT MOTHERBUCKING LINK OF HOPES, DREAMS, AND SECRET DESIRES (THAT'S RIGHT! IT'S BACK BITCHES!)
Gonna read since I'm already here.
Brb
I really liked it. The whole story was tense and well written. Kudos
. I'm going to assume that the "monster" was a human, because that's the obvious direction your description pushed it in. Either way, good job.
This is why I like "Dark" stories. Because they're intense and mysterious. I loved it.
W-What? That was intense. Good story.
Nice for the first time a dark story that doesn't end with the death of a character
The sequel to this needs to be a full-blown story
And then Applebloom had the stuffing hugged out of her.
There isn't a part 2?