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Nightmare night is the time for scares,
But with black magic, you must beware.
For if one becomes careless in their fun,
They will loathe the day they ever saw the sun!
I offer my magic to bring joy to their faces,
But alas, these spells come from very dark places.
~Zecora on spiritual magic and potions.
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Too fast paced but really well done. I liked it.
And I now nominate Zecora as least responsible zebra.
Eh, seemed a bit too mean to just leave Pinkie trapped there forever. Gosh It almost seems like Zecora planned this...
3301399 >:3
Well that was fucked up one would have to "really" not like her to make her disappear into the void like that O_O
It was a good idea, and well enough written. However, it felt a bit more intended as a child's tale more than a tragedy.. Eh.
"The man who makes himself a monster is a man who removes himself from the pain of being human." - Roadside Picnic, Arkady Strugatsky.
liked it, but I kinda wish the ending was different. Still, good story
Me like
3317312 Thank you. Glad you do.
A very good story, it filled me with fright.
x8
It was worth the read and filled me with delight.
But I must be honest with you my friend,
I think that you could have done more with the end.
Funny though it was to see Pinkie's joke,
the lack of intensity just made me mope.
A scene of desperation to get back to her skin,
would have undoubtedly caused me to grin.
Despite the abruptness, the story was great!
I'd rate this tale eight out of eight.