I'm going to use this section to test out my tablet's voice to text feature when I get a chance.
This is my first fic ever. Pinkie Pie and Slendermane meet and adorable romantic hi jinks ensue.
UPDATE: This fic is NOT dead. I am going to work on it until I finish it, I just don't have much time lately. As it stands, I'm going to probably release mini chapters whenever I can, then reformat a few of them into bigger chapters later. Cheers!
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hmm..... will watch to see where this go's.
1888436 thanks! just finished this chapter. I'm a little slow on updates, mostly cuz I use other peoples' computers, but I will try to be as quick as possible!
no rush, at your own pace
Well that was unexpected
1888436 goes*
1888766 happens.
hmmm
Make another one soon? Oh pretty pretty please!!!
this was wonderful!!
MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
Thank you
(enter epic slendermane emocon)
1909247 Danke! It might be a little longer than the last update. I've got another project that has really gotten its claws in me, so I'm kinda wrapped up in that
"This fic is the best fic ever."
- Pancakes, about this fic
Nice fic, I didn't see any typos and it was put together very well.
By your comment, I guess you are German, too?(Yes, I am German, but born American)
DERP! I hate to comment twice, but this is a good job! I don't notice any critical mistakes that would end in many dislikes and bad comments. Which is why there are plenty of likes, including mine. May Slendy hunt down the two that disliked.
PinkiSlender...That's a new one... I approve!
This is single handedly the strangest pairing I have ever seen... And you've pulled it of brilliantly so far. Well done.
1955336 Teehee, thanks. The idea actually came from a user comment on a fic called "I Would Smile If I Could" Great fic. Think it may have gone dead, but the first chapter is totally worth reading. All about Scoots and Slendy, but in a totally non-romantic way. Either way, someone had said "When I saw the title, I thought this was going to be a Pinkie x Slendermane ship" and I was like,
well, THAT'S gonna be a thing.
1955388
I think I read that fic. Huh. Well, I like what you did with the idea, and for that, you get a complimentary moustache.
D'aaaaaawwwwwww
Good job on this chapter, epic feels. Now for the next chapter make sure to have all the ponies run around screaming "THE HORROR! THE HORROR!"
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^ What I pictured while reading. Faved and liked and anything else I can do to support this.
1962916 BAHAHAHAHA that's perfect. And thanks SO much!
dawww slender mane found a friend...dawwwww
slendy+pinkie pie=
this is ofically on my top 3 best fan fics of all time
more I NEED MORE *throws chair out the window*
(IN DEMON VOICE) GIVE ME MORE 
(in normal voice) thank you 
more is on the ways folks. been a little mixed up with some boyfriend drama
, so my art career is a tad sillysauce right now, but the next chaptwer is about halfway done.
well that went by fast i Personally think you are kind of rushing things in each chapter like it starts then it ends in less than 2 minutes most story's i read have longer chapters but i still love this story (but plea try and make it more dramatic)
I would recommend making the chapters a bit longer. It felt rushed, and I think that you could have put a bit more in there. Otherwise, I like how you justified Fluttershy's knowledge of Slendermane with her animals. All in all, a very good chapter.
I agree with the DrahcirAloer; You need to click the ENTER key every now and again. Otherwise a pretty decent chapter.
My reactions-in order-are as follows:
stupid fluttershy
omg thank you guys so much for les feedbacks! I really appreciate it! anything I can do to make my fics better is much appreciated!
yay! Update!
Anywho, this is a truly wonderful little fic so far, and I hope my criticism servers you well. Toodles!~
I have to say though, the pacing seems a little bit rushed. Not only that, but the characterizations seem a *little bit* exaggerated with the rest of the Mane 6. Mostly Fluttershy. What happened to Fluttershy's kindness? Why couldn't she have given him at least a chance? Has she no sympathy for the poor creature, having to lurk in the shadows, with no pony to love?
I DO like, however, that you tried to emphasize that she's not a coward and a pushover, and wanted to defend her friends, so at least you tried there.
2071253 She'll get there. sometimes a pony's fatal flaw can get in the way of their element. Like When AJ is too proud to admit she needs help.
Sooo... are you done with this fic?
They should have let slendy explain himself
I feel really sorry for slendy
2676018 I am not. I have just been super busy with working my new job. I need to get back to it at some point, though.
2684687
Oh, that's good to hear. Is there anyway I can help?
Yay for updates!
Gotta say I thought this fic was dead, glad to see I was wrong. 
Here's hoping that you can mend Pinkie's broken heart. 
Great story... this needs to be completed... OR ELSE
Keep up the good work.
great so far i hope you continue soon
d'awwww
have a fav
1958218 Haha, oh, THEY WILL.
I was happy.
Then I was angry.
Now I'm crying.
My emotions.
Help.
Please continue this
is this a dead fic now?
wait pinkie has more than one male admirer?