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It's been forty years since Rainbow Dash took Scootaloo under her wing. In that time, the small filly has grown up and started her own life. This did not stop Scootaloo from remembering the most important pony in her life.
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I love stories that are about people (ponies in this case) remembering what's important in life, and it always being bitter-sweet.
Hmm........that was an okay story, but here, let me review it.
The problem is-
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-that it was a rather decent slice of life.
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(\(;_;)/)
Why you make me sadded?
1817263 Because a lot of fucked up shit is happening in the world. Both mine and everyone else's.
Diggin' it, man.
1817536 Thank you.
Personal experience is a good thing to write off of, and despite how short this thing was, it was strangely beautiful. It didn't take every last thing and make it an agony. You expressed the realistic feelings of someone in that situation. Realism is hard to come by in Fan Fics, and this genre tends to be one of the most jaded, with the definite exception of romance. I don't think anyone else is going to say this, but as it is, it's easily one of the best sadfics I've ever read.
Also, I wish your grandmother a peaceful rest of her days.
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And thanks for the concern.
That was really short, yet it was quite emotional. I'm not really sure how to describe it, but it was great.
1817757 Thank you. I hope the shortness wasn't a bad thing though.
1817761 It wasn't; short and sweet. Oh, I'll pray for your grandma. My grandma isn't doing too well herself.
Thanks for the story I know what your dealing with I gone thought it my self you are in my thoughts.
1817942 Your welcome and thank you for reading.
Those first two lines made me feel sad... the rest not as much but good story.
1817982 Thank you.
Cherish what time you have with your grandmother. You're lucky to still have one worth caring about.
I think I get the idea why you recommended this to me. Thanks man.
Short but sweet, It made me a little sad but I still enjoyed the story despite the sadness. You have really improved since your first stories and everything seems more paced and smooth, keep the awesomeness up!
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Thank ye kindly
1820843 is the story over?
3134944. Shit man! I completely forgot about this! Yea, it is. This was a one shot.
3138835 well thanks for the answer
i cried when i was reading this 
a very good story
and im sorry for you grandmother i know what it feels my grandmother died 3 years ago
This really hits me where I live.
Beautiful.....
3945937 Thank you very much.
3950888 You're welcome.
To quote the great. Twitter bitch:
Dem feels.
Another brilliant piece of Bronywork. If I read one more story of this quality, I might just have to follow.
I can definitely feel you with the whole grandmother thing. I visited my great aunt once for a few days, and grew so attached to her you'd think id know her all my life. She and her husband were the ones who taught me to play chess. Before I left, I promised I'd visit her again someday.
Well, about a year later, I got a call while I was on vacation with my grandmother that my aunt died. It was a horrible feeling, knowing if never see her again. What was even worse is that I broke my promise. I never paid a second visit.
I definitely feel you. Absolutely. Celestia, I'm tearing up now.
P.S.
Take it away, Brendan Urie!
Oh memories,
Where did you go?
You're all I've ever known!
How I miss yesterday, I let it fade away.
Don't fade awa-a-a-ay...