• Member Since 10th Oct, 2012
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TheExhaustedBrony


I wish I could just finish all the half-done stories I've got backlogged.

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Being royalty means that you have the responsibility to provide for all your subjects. However, it's impossible to please everyone and some may resent your leadership. Princess has many friends and about half as many enemies.

BIG THANKS to my friend, Kalreas, for providing the basis for this story! He did a pretty big chunk of the work so you should check him out!

Written for the 31shotober challenge!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Snarky guard fulfilled his oath.

Damn. Very nicely done.

Nice. A bit rushed in pacing, but this is One-Shotober, so that's to be expected. And I can't think of any changes that wouldn't just bog the story down, either.

Thank you for reminding me all those guards are there for a reason. But, sacrifice is an investment, not a waste, and I would love to know what happened to the would-be assassin, where all this went.

Beautiful... :fluttercry:

dang. not bad, not bad at all.

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