This story focuses on a man who had nothing left. Stuck in a rut in a failing town had nothing more to look forward to and just when he was going to cut his existence short he stumbles upon a white light. This light will change him for the better.
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That was a nice little story. I enjoyed the little heartfelt moments. It's also an interesting idea to raise a pony from another world like you would a regular child.
3211811 Thank you. My friend did put alot of work into this tory to try to mkae the best he can. He'll be adding the rest very shortly once it's through our editing.
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Alright, good. I was hoping there would be more. I thought I had finished the story but then saw that it was incomplete and got happy again.
Wait, is this still incomplete? Cuz it better not be. That was a really sad yet wonderful end to the story. Celestia didn't really seem to care, though (even if she did cry). But oh well. Great story overall. A couple of typos here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed, really
3215632 We'll there was a part 2 my friend had written. But I'll be adding that under a different story. And thank you for the comliments. He likes to hear his hard work has been liked
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Let him know that it was a great story that has a lot of potential to become featured. I think it does.
3215707 Thank you
I'll let my friend know once I see him tomorrow at work. I'll be posting it to mine since he doesn't have a computer for now. I'll message you when the newest story comes out
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Okay, thanks.
A change to the first part of the chapter and some other edits will be in progress.