The Portal between Earth and Equestria has opened, the fight to save what remains of humanity begins. This is a sequel to 'Coming Out of It'.
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>inb4 nuke
Very good and I'm glad you're back.
I would however like to nit pick just a little, it should be Frau empress or if the little pretzel muncher is unmarried she would be a Fraulein. Herr is the male.
Let's just hope Dominic doesn't go the same way Carolus went.
7066874 balefire
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Fixed!
V for Vendetta reference?
0:31-0:44
(reads the ending at a pace that feels synced with the music)
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Magic.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
I see dusty the cropduster pilot made it in heh. And also wewt a booze store! They gon hit that shit like it's 1999 and it ain't fer drinkin boys its fer fuel!!!!
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Yup, I was actually just about to reply to your comment and say 'Hey, I'm using Dusty!'.
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I think its a nice little touch to use some fan suggestions in little subtle parts of a story.
It makes you just feel more in tune with it ya know?
And it gives a few more characters that might be given a background later on that readers may empathize with and possibly feel a sort of loss irl if they were to die.
Also I feel as if Luna might be in a spot of bother what with her subjects and her self identity.
But its good to see someone else questioning what they actually can do in their own country.
I feel like if she could talk with someone about what's bothering her then she might understand a bit more about the feeling she is getting.
7067762. I'm Intrigued.
7073304 Any idea on when a new chapter will be out?
7126471 Some time soon, I've just been really busy lately.
Why does he keep slipping into pseudo-German? Was he subjected to some kind of conditioning as a kid that makes him channel his inner-Rommel or something under "command conditions"?
General Baxter must go through the portal ASAP.
Dominic is going full frontal assault on the EOL, though how he react that there was an ex-spy among them and that an EOL assassin is approaching him over time