The Portal between Earth and Equestria has opened, the fight to save what remains of humanity begins. This is a sequel to 'Coming Out of It'.
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Onward, evermore.
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inb4 Equestrian comedic musician Spike Pones makes his version of this.
Nah, that won't happen, mainly because I can't be bothered to write parody lyrics...
7229601 That sounds like Fallout 4 music, rite der. But of course, I just finished a ten level, 3-day binge, so...
The stuff's kinda on mah mind.
you forgot to take off italics after this part
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Semper Fidelis
Good work.
Italics much?
So the war against the E.O.L. is over, the soldiers are marching home again, and Celestia is finally considering pulling that stick out of her plot-hole.
I just have two questions...
1:Does this mean we're finally getting the focus back on the characters rather than the conflict?
2:Seriously, where the fuck was Twilight during the last few chapters, first Celestia forgets she exists, now you do?
...Or is it that you forgot she was there, and as a result didn't think to include/mention her in the relevant parts?
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Fixed.
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It's kinda like that, yeah. I'm looking it over now to see how I can fix that, because damn, I spaced that big time. I only just realized it.
Now that they've won the war. Are they going to have to fight one in Equestria? What will Rainbow Dash do now that she has defected to the United States? Are her friends still her friends? I personally think that Rainbow Dash has not lost her friends. These are her life-long friends why would they move against her.She just needs to think this out. Do her friends know that she has defected? I'm pretty sure that Luna will vowch for Rainbow Dash's loyalty. I wonder how well she would do flying the New planes?
Now I know that the E.O.L. was not the only large organization that the world was fighting. Does the world not need help at other locations on the planet?
You have done a wonderful job on the story so far I do look forward to seeing the next exciting chapter.
Dragonfox
7230142 Really? Wow, I was just joking. Wait a second, how could you have not realized till now, when I made this comment in the previous chapter?![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
...Are my comments not interesting enough for you anymore Boss-sempai?(sniffle)![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
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Who are you again?![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
EDIT: I'm kidding, you know that right? Of course your comments are interesting, hell, that's the best part of posting a new chapter is getting to hear from you lovely people
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I applaud your story telling skills good Sir. I could not put down my tablet until I had gotten to the end. I do have an idea for the winged forces and the biplanes. If you are interested you can message my account and I will let you know. Do not want to give spoilers in the comments.
Did anyone catch the Tremors reference.
![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Scribs reminds me a lot of Joseph Galloway from the book We Were Soldiers Once...and Young. Just me?
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For the Sirelands!! For America!!!
God I'm oozing liquid patriotism right now....
And yes I did cut myself on a piece of glass a few minutes ago so I am bleeding, quite heavily in fact.
I'll need to re-read this story at some point as I forget, but why did Rainbow defect? From what I can tell, she fought alongside some of the 'Americans' at some point and enjoyed it. Is that really all there is to it?
I get that this story is very pro-American, but I can't see her defecting because she liked fighting alongside them more than being with her friends/family/nation/etc.
Again, I have forgotten the reason and apologize if this comment seems stupid.
The best way to insure that your country is always the world's superpower is by putting your thumb over everyone elce, because that worked out GREAT for England during the revolutionary war!![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
Fucking finally.
Comedic relief video was top notch. Chapter was great and the extra laugh waiting for me at the end knocked the whole thing out of the park. Well done sir, well done.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
so i have a freedom boner now.
This entire scene reminded me of this scene from one of my most favourite games.
https://m.Rainbow Dash defected, because she was considered a traitor, because she wouldn't do the spy mission. She escaped and made it to the American lines.
The fact we aren't even halfway through the story yet, I'm assuming the "Earth" arc of the story is over, next is what I'm dubbing, "The Tribunal" arc.
ALL RIGHT !!! I WAS WONDERING WHEN GILDA WAS GOING TO SHOW UP !!! HUZZAH...THE MISCHIEF HAS BEEN DOUBLED !!!